Reviews of Unfathomable Patriarch by kuropon8 - Webnovel

this is purely a stupid story and stupid mc .......................................................................................................................

my second review and I say it's a fantastic story although a little slow paced and cliffhangers a realistic mc with morals[img=update]

The MC is a western(america) geek dropped into a eastern type cultivation culture, with social anxiety, low self confidence, no courage(went in the negative), goodie 2 shoes, probably a virgin, everything about the novel is great exept the MC, maybe his personality will get better but by how bad it is it will probably take a very long time, im at ch 22.

not good enough, it just wasted my time, the volume 3 was a mess instead of advancing the author nerfed the mc, worst of all I got baited and read the summoning part, it was the worst change of plot ever, what benefits did he get there? none instead his cultivation was reset, that was the worst thing I've ever read, pure waste of time, I'm speechless how I stay overnight for this for whole 2 days.

So painful to wait for several days for a single chapter

I wish the author was releasing at least 2 chapters daily. At the current pace maybe we will finish the book in 5 years. Hopefully he won't quit midway.

The story is good but often it also gets tedious. The author is prone to rewriting the same plot/subplot just in different manner without the story progressing in any meaningful way.

A GOOD READ AND WOULD LIKE MORE CHAPTERS Some people have bad reviews because this novel has a not-somuch-generic kill, save girl, make Harem MC but it's not true as like every novel it is also changing in later stages You're too inexperienced if you give a novel which has 400+ chapters a bad review after reading less than 200chapters I mean I have seen novel like armipotent which becomes gem after 100s of chs and some like mutagen I which I lost interest after several chs coz they keep evolving

i honestly don't mind his lack of courage, i think it is quite okay and realistic enough. what i mind is the mc. he is a stuttering idiot who can't even hold a conversation and scratches his neck in like all conversations. i get that some people have a nervous tick but scrathing neck? that action is very unnatural plus the mc seems to have very little common sense.

It took me a while to evaluate this work that I have been following for over a year. I would like to congratulate the author for being in constant exploration of narrative, it is a delicious story to inspire new authors. It is not a story focused on innovation in clichéd formulas, but the author knows how to abandon it for his narrative, in the more clichéd phases it is possible to jump without prejudice to the plot, thanks to the comedy used as a method of reviewing the lost in reading.

I am glad I always try out new novels without reading the reviews, or else I would miss great works like this one. I am not too picky regarding cultivation novels. But this one really surprised me positively. It has the realistic feeling of a MC that deals with a new reality, growing and adapting himself without forgetting his own principles. I also like the mystery surrounding the origin and purpose of all of these worlds. I really enjoy reading your novel and I went on binge-reading for the last couple days. P.S.: the title is perfect, glad you didn’t changed it ☺️ P.P.S.: the fact it’s not premium is a big bonus😁

Pero que buena novela amigo me sorprende que esta historia tenga tan pocas visitas esta novela se merece mucho mas.Ademas si tuviera dinero estaria dispursto a hacerme Premium

Por lo que va de la historia hasta ahora me va gustando vastante compañero sigue haci aunque me encantaria si algun dia hubiera algun lanzamiento masivo

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I really like this type of novel with semi-realist protagonist (with default) and chill story but with some fight (sorry for my english i’ m french)

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a novel worthy of picking up as a reader i always look for the new chapter to be released. don't let this one past's you by. MC come's to a new world of martial art and find he has a family to protect and as with all great MC when he rise so dose his followers. this world is giant and and MC is OP but this new world sect are are strong and make for a grand game how will be top dog.

I seldom make a review but I think it deserve it. To those stupid people that mc is a coward and weak how low your logic can u be. A man that live in peace time is transported to another world and u think he will be like a man with a killer personality. I think this is the most realistic transported reaction in all novels I have read. He needs a special skill for clearing his mind with killing heck he even has ptsd after his first kill of a man. In the real world you will have ptsd or nightmare after killing except you're a psychopath which I'm assuming you guys are because u think you'll be fine and brave if you're transported from your home to a jungle with killer bunnies. To all of guys that is in the edge if you want to read this or not then I hope this helps. MC here is not a pussy beta male that being push around and he's also not a alpha kill the shit that doesn't give me face. He's a normal human like me or you that doesn't even know why face in cultivation is so important sorry for the rant

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A historia e maravilhosa, gostei muito, meu único pesar e que o autor só publica um capitulo por dia. venham ler e aproveitar um protagonista que alcançará as maiores alturas...

for me this work is a very good wuxia style self insert. i really like the overall tone of the Book and how the arks are being written. all in all, a very solid work.

Me encanta, me molesta que solo sean 1 capitulo cada dos días, pero me gusta la estabilidad de que siempre sea 1 capitulo cada dos días, quizás liberar mas capítulos en fechas espaciales, no se, esta bien como esta.

Good story so far Keep up the good work End.

Good story so far End.

To anyone who wants to start reading this know that the beggining is shit and there is a system but dont worry later on he will lose the system(read more to find out why) and mc gets more brave he gets a wife, kid and a sect but this is later on the line. the story is super interesting i recommend it to everyone, the first few chapters is character development with the mc having the mentality of a manchild from modern earth who never talked to a girl but later on he does better also if you dont like the system good for you the system is a divice that someone is using to absorbe divine qi that the user gathers and send it to its creator mc is like user 111213123 well not that number but you get me.(he doesnt know this mc fights a top rank necant soul demon and he "dies" and we get a diologe where the system leaves and says how much divine energy it absorbed but then the item mc found/took from the demon will heal/rivive him that someone from earth(i think) made). if you dont like slow pase then this story is not for you mc takes his time no super boost with plot amoror, mc slowly rises his cultivation. for now he is always below his great enemie(right now he is middle stage nacent soul but top sects have high rank and top 3 sects have great sercle) but he somehow wins it will tecnique and mc supirior cultivation tecqnues plus body technuqe that is not below his qi stage this is why he can fight people 1 rank i above him and berly win