Very original concept ,slightly cliche but applauded efforts.if only author can continue this story, it will be a hit.thank you.
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Over all, a very interesting concept! The grammar can get messy, requiring that I re-read chapters in order to understand them fully. However, the story presented is incredibly unique! With a bit of polish, this will become a real gem!
Hey everyone... I gonna give me stars. This is my first time writing a novel so please be patient with me.
(And for my English is not my native language. So sorry for mistakes.)
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Have a good day everyone.
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