The First in Line First in Line

A young man by the name of Devon Mersi craves independence, exploration, and most importantly: adventure. Join along in his journey to witness his many adventures. Please leave feedback, because I plan to post at least three chapters per week, to a maximum of five per week. Chapters on average will be 1000 - 5000 words, excluding the prologue which is merely a teaser. I really am just curious of what people think of this, and whether or not there is any interest. Please, again, leave feedback, and thank you for reading this!