I like the story but I hi early believe all the chapters should be looked over. Everything feels a bit rushed and things are very unclear and confusing. Things are not really explained well, that's what lead to my confusion. I do love the characters of the story. I dont know if this is your first work or not but I commend your effort on this book.
About a “guy” who was a spoiled man whore who turns into a girl (and is fine with it lol) and doesn’t try to change back. Dropping but best of luck. Lots of holes in the thinking but it’s their story not mine.
Well I'm glad you added that futa tag. I'm going to stay away though. Once read a boot up to chapter 150 then they added futas... Never had a tag for it or anything.
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