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Rudi_Khoerruddin
Good story at least for me. Hope the story will stay good until later
But something bugged me, dunno what .. maybe that just some weird feeling about his backstory
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God_defying_donger
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Raidenxlight
Exp t for the time of time I am a good one and I was a good one and I am so good I was so good I didnβt even think I was a kid I am so good for the story Exp t for the time of time I am a good one and I was a good one and I am so good I was so good I didnβt even think I was a kid I am so good for the story
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Raidenxlight
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Raidenxlight
Exp is the time of time for a time for you and a time time of a good story time time is time of the story of time and time returning a good time Exp is the time of time for a time for you and a time time of a good story time time is time of the story of time and time returning a good time Exp is the time of time for a time for you and a time time of a good story time time is time of the story of time and time returning a good time Exp is the time of time for a time for you and a time time of a good story time time is time of the story of time and time returning a good time
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Raidenxlight
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ThatOneGUy
Great story with interesting plot and ideas, don't drop it and keep writing and I'm sure it will rise the ranks slowly and steadily with the good quality.
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