Reviews of The Dream Shifter by Nightmare_weaver - Webnovel

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I love the story, this story clearly show us that no one was born strong, it is a known fact that we are who we are because we developed ourselves, skills and talents and that is the same thing Yuki (MC) underwent in this story. He was a weak boy who dreamt of doing the impossible and he never gave up on his dreams. The charact design is good and so is the story development. I really enjoyed reading this novel and hope that others will join me. So everyone let's continue reading. Thanks author for this wonderful story.

Great job author. As we read the chapters , it's really like watching Yuke changes and how he struggles to get to his goal. The characters's description is so good. Wish you the best.

Like any normal reader, I was entranced by the book cover and the title... Then I was in for a satisfying ride when I started reading the chapters, as this is a rather fresh take on fantasy from most stories I've read. The protagonist is also realistically weak, and a bit of an oddball with his vivid daydreaming and head in the cloud personality. I'm glad that he's surrounded by friends instead of being asocial lol. His reaction to the fantastical world is simply true and with the author's skills in writing... a wonderful tale is born for us to read!

Very unique story, your wordings and how you write is precisely smooth, it is readable and I enjoyed reading the first chapter so as knowing the characters especially Yuki, I like the plot terms you made and your creativity they have potential. Me... is also a an Author who's hardworking to enhance my writing skills so being said that you write so well is something to be proud of. Good Luck Author! keep up the good work.

Oh my...this story is amazing and quite fascinating. I like how the plot and storyline are written. I love the combinations of genres in this story. The character build up and world background are good. Grammar wise and structure wise....I have nothing to say. IF YOU WANT TO UNDERSTAND WHAT I AM SAYING PLEASE READ THIS NOVEL FOR YOU TO SEE. Congrats author-san for your great work. Keep the story flowing.

This an interesting tale of Yuki and his survival in a world where has to fight. He is an MC that you want to read more off and how overcome his struggle as he more of the average side when it comes to MC. The battles in this story are also good and captures you into them.

Wow, I’ll say it first. Love the MC, Yuki. Though he maybe too timid for me at the beginning but guess that’s how it is for novel like this. Love Yuki cos me too, I’m a daydreamer. Can’t seem to focus and keep my head up in the cloud. So hi Yuki, you got a friend here 😂 Now onto the writing, what I really love from your story is actually your writing style. Your description of an event or an area were nicely done. It made me imagine the scenario in my head easily. Love your rich vocabulary and the smoothness of the transition in the story. The only issue is the paragraph being too dense. It lessens the tension in your story and it’s not so easy in they eyes. But yeah that’s about it I guess and some minor grammar errors which not really affecting your story. It’s still AWESOME 🥳 Keep up the good work author! May your novel appear in the trending list!

This novel is good . I like how you put the action through in it . Yuki can be some times cute and stubborn but that only makes him more realistic . I cannot point any grammer errors as i am myself a beginner . About the development of the characters you are going a good job . Keep it up . So far the novel is good . Well keep writing .

I really like how the story is highly influenced by japanese light novels as I am an avid fan myself. The concept behind the story is fairly untouched and bizzare enough that makes you want to read more. There is little to speak of in terms of errors but I think you should utilize commas more in the narrations, that's all. Amazing story! Keep up the good work author!!! ʕ•ﻌ•ʔ

People like Yuki are present in many schools and colleges. He is a daydreamer and a strange character, not able to get along with his class fellows. I have read a few chapters. After the first chapter, does he start to change. Writing quality is good, Stability of updates is good too as already 90 plus chapters have been published. The story is developing. Will come back to read more later on. Character design and world background is equally good. All the best.

The novel began to read chapter 1, quietly grew into 10! Easy to read, romance, school, supernatural! I liked the construction of dialogues, they are live, as if watching an anime, and with high quality! The novel breathes, the characters are active, the novel itself is fascinating! What I especially liked was the dialogue! Thanks to the author for such an interesting novel! Yours faithfully

Great writing quality. Nice storyline. Good world background and character development. No grammatical error prob but little typos that can go barely unnoticed. D problem I have is that, the paragraph's are long, perhaps it changed it future chapters, but I haven't read that much. And ur chapter damn is long. U can get 2 to 3 chapters from that. Because for someone like me, it made it hard to follow... I had to strain my eyes till the 25 pages ended. It was harder bcos the paragraphs were long. So I read a long paragraph continuously for many pages. I had to overly calm my mind and read some paragraphs again to grasp what was happening, esp during Yuki's walk after he left home for school. No your details are on point. Everything good. Its just that little prob I have. There might be others like me. I'm sorry, longest review I have given. Perhaps add me up on discord if you are there. @BaeVida#7167

The writing quality is good, I didn't find any typos or grammar errors. The stability of updates can be elevated more. But it is up to the author. Story development and world background are also great in my opinion. Lastly, the character design is realistic enough. Added to my library

I am still dipping my toes into the literary fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesn’t. Turns out, this book works for me! The names of the characters sounded Japanese, and so they gave me Anime-ish vibes (Yuki, Momoko, Saki). The ambiance (how you set the settings) is good, and text is also grammar-wise. Good job! Best of luck in your writing.

Very well crafted, this story. Minimal error to speak of and dialogue flows naturally. I honestly have very little to say without going into the nitpicks. That's a testament to how silid the riting is. Keep on keeping on good Author 👍

You have really nice writing that flows and you break up the paragraphs smoothly and its easy on the eyes. I loved how you started the story and gave us a glimpse into this mysterious world. Your also really good at setting tone and mood through the way you describe. Your character is solid and I like the premise of your story. Keep up the good work!

Impressed by the writing style... it's just beautiful. I am liking the story and the thoughts of the mc. It's getting intriguing as I read more.

Hello! As thanks for the review swap, here I am! Please don't expect some kind of expertness from me for I am not a professional editor. Okay, let's start! Your story doesn't have any wrong grammars and typo, and It's actually a good thing(unlike me). The main character can be realistic, he has flaws, strength. Well, keep writing more because I'm going to bid this story good luck.

I like your writing . No mistakes and nice details allowing one to envision it. And I gave an extra for your thick face. Even at my best, I can only do this swap review. Keep up the good work

Updating my review as my first review was written when there were only a few chapters. I was proven right that this was going to be a good novel. This turned out to be a good read. The story starts of somewhat slow but it holds very impressive character development that is important to flesh out characters. The words used to describe situations And everything are very well chosen and there are alot of words that are advanced and used well. This brings about a detailed imaged of what is occurring and paints a picture beautifully

Yuki feels real. He has flaws, loves, falls and all the complexities to make an intriguing character. While he begins as rather wimpy, watching him grow is a very satisfying read, and I urge readers to give this piece a chance. You need to read past the first chapter to where the book really starts to shine. I also really like the slive of life feeling at the very beginning, and the odd relationships Yuki has with other characters. Odd, but fun. If that makes sense?

I like your writing style; it's excellent! Grammar and punctuation are all fine. You got a really nice vocabulary there, I can say. However, I think you can extend it much further, but considering you're writing too many chapters per day with a large length, I can say it's worthy of praise and it's really admirable. Updates are ideal! However, I've got a piece of advice here for you: Why not make the chapters shorter? It gets a little bit tedious to read a chapter with a long length. My suggestion is to make the chapters' length near 1.2k words. This way, you can release more chapters and be in the update list for more time and also exceed your views. Your readers won't get bored and will read the other parts when they can. Doesn't it sound better? Also, the paragraphs are a bit too long. There is much distinct information in each paragraph I noticed, so why not split them into more paragraphs centered on that different information you want to give your readers? I've enjoyed the story until volume 1. I will give a better review when things go further. And let's be honest, the real challenge starts in the middle of the way. So don't lose your motivation and don't drop this novel because you can get a good place at TOP with this update stability and writing quality. But anyway, it's just me advising and it's your choice. Have a fun time writing!

Coming from webtoons and manga, I appreciate this work a lot. The visual language makes it easy to envision the world with little effort. The pacing is slightly slow at the beginning, but necessary. I feel like this helps with the world building elements. I look forward to following this story further, has a lot of potential!

Great introduction which raised the standard for the rest. Writing quality is of good quality. Nice characters definitions, good storyline and great world set-up. As a fellow author, I say you are doing a good job. Keep it up.

I can see that you're passionate about writing because this story is well crafted and not rushed. Regarding the text: it has good grammar and it's easy to understand. Regarding the story: The descriptions paint a whole picture in your mind with vivid scenes. And you are immediately introduced to the main character and shown how he is and where he starts his journey. I like how you build up the ML as a character. "The more you write, the better you become," they say, so keep at it. Well done.

I'm kind of new to whole web novel stuff. My friend got me into it and I've only read a few novels but this is one of those and I've been enjoying this a lot. I had a good experience

The story is interesting but its slow pace which im not use to but over all its a great story would recommend it. The characters are developed and there not much i can say since ive only read the first few chapters

This is really good! No matter if you are a girl or a boy you will surely like this. Author sama had done a good job laying out the story and portraying each character as well. This has a lot of potential. If you want to know more about the story. Read it. Really worth a try. ^^

Great read can't believe not a lot of people discovered this. The author clearly knows what he/she is doing, good grammar, description, and punctuation. Can't wait to see where this tale goes!