Chapter comments on the chapter XXV. The Exile of the book Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

The story is so fucking flawed its not even funny. The thinking and the logic in this novel is just either so extreme or weird af. The nigga didnt even care about his stepfather who cared for him but keeps trying to avenge some Brett guy he never even met single mindedly. All the characters are weird and skewed in a way that makes it awkward and cringy to read. The MC is a ****tard, simp, beta, ungrateful, whiny bastard who is always either complaining or crying or being a big simp. He literally killed a person before, fought and trained for 10 fucking years in a viking world and tasted unfairness from the first day there. He literally saw and admired Marni for killing multiple people in the forest, but is now crying because 2 assholes ganged up on him with real weapons and attacked him with intent to kill? He is crying because he protected himself and attacked back and cut the guy? What in the flippin fuk is this ****? This is some Chinese cultivation novel bull**** logic and writing right there.

Stupid, they literally attacked him together with real weapons and the intent to harm. Yet he is the one being called evil wtf? There is no such thing as right and wrong. Only what is decided by those who hold the power, or the majority In the real world

omg he is such a baby

18 year old hard core Viking man baby.

Wait so this is a Viking community, they dont believe in "fair fights"only winning. So why is he being punished for winning a 2 V.s. 1 fight, where they came at him with the intent to harm. Shouldn't he be praised and seen as advanced or something?

He is acting like a b*tch..

has he lived in this world for 10 years and still talks about justice? this is boring

Thx for the chapter 😻

Good

Really needs work, if you're already so far into this story you should maybe go back and edit something's if you have improved especially seeing this he's a goddamn cry baby he's supposed to be a viking if anything the Vikings wouldn't if cared if he nearly killed them and all that this is very very flawed

they ambushed him with real weapons, but he's the one that gets in trouble? what the actual **** is going on?

Dag just need time and training to learn of his powers. I was wondering how is hiro actually. No mention of others.

dag character didn't change even after 10 years of time skip. no character growth.

Thx

Thanks for the chapter!