Chapter comments on the chapter The tragedy of the MC and the angel flag Boss of death!(Part 1) of the book I transmigrated to a mafia character from a BL Dark novel!

omg the large amount of descriptions is driving me crazy, it's been 15 chapters already and he still hasn't gone out of his room!

Uhh.. okay if you wanna put some warning just put two or three is enough. But if you put same warning over and over again it's make readers feel uncomfortable..

i feel the author dedication toward world building is awesome and all? but too much info in 1 chapter feels like a chore , i keep skipping to find the main plot lol it would be much better if this info is inserted bit by bit as the main plot progressed instead.

I understand that his info has not been sent blah blah hence his terrible treatment… but mention it like ever chapter makes it less important and wth your like descripting the same thing in the same way but just like have it in different paragraphs I don’t care if the Abby is diamond encrusted if it has nothing to do with the story!

Did you forget that he's injured? And all he did was sleep it off and he got better?

Thx for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Estou realmente gostando <3 não vejo a hora de ler os próximos capítulos :D

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