The narrator's dialogue is a nice touch. It really adds up to this fairy tale atmosphere.
There are a generous amount of plot twists, which is good to keep the readers more invested on the story.
Good job, Mr. Author. It's a very good read.
The western high Fantasy setting was a breath of fresh air for me. A good change of pace from all the eastern fantasy settings of immortal cultivation and martial arts. World building was good and didn’t feel like info dumps. I enjoyed reading your story :) I hope you keep writing. Keep up the good work 👍
Absolutely love this book! Has all of the fantasy elements with twists that keeps it unique. I find myself invested in the characters. I get mad at the bad guys and not ashamed to say shed a few tears at some sad parts. It’s a fun story with an intricate storyline thats weaved beautifully together which is amazing since theres so many storylines in twined. I’m dying to see how it ends and dreading it at the same time. I don’t want to let the characters go. Maybe author will do a sequel and/or prequel? I can only hope!!
Loving the story so far. I enjoy the different story lines of the different royal families and especially love Jareth 🤤🤤 i have already Re-read and even though there are some grammer errors it doesnt take away from the story.