Chapter comments on the chapter Prologue of the book The Magician of Sound

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TallicaStew
Alright, a little rushed. I do have to say that I hate being teased with "this person is this way because of 'that'" just friggin tell us. A lot of authors seem to use 'that'because they can't quite think of what they want to do, sometimes they completely forget about it and we, the readers, are left hanging. Either reveal it right away or just ignore mentioning it and reveal it later. Don't act like you're hiding something super special.
4yr
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Fernein
Honestly, the idea that a sound magician is useless I find strange. Think about the applications solely for battle. Using resonant frequencies to boil your enemies, high pitched noises to disable the animals, easier recon work, you could literally use sound to blast holes into objects How is it useless?
3yr
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PopcornSectSenior
Hmm, while not the best intro, I did like this chapter. The amount of cliches were a bit difficult to swallow but let's hope it gets watered down a bit
3yr
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HeavensRuler
I think that Author is an Anime Fan.
3yr
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Seth_Toney
I guess Chinas wall didn't protect the from the *Mongrel* Horde... 😂
3yr
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hk041193
Get someone to proof read it as there are some grammatical mistakes.
3yr
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Jorell_Johnson_9231
I think I'd like to have a bro con sister.it would make my life so much more interesting
3yr
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udinsan
I don't know what's wrong but the first two chapters to me doesn't have any space between paragraph at all, just a big wall of text. You might want to check on this...
3yr
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ImASimp
Knock Knock FBI Open Up
3yr
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Lossutra
Sound is pretty much just more advanced wind magic.
3yr
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DaoistosrKh6
hope the mc is not weak cause I am here because I saw the overpowered tag
10mth
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Book_of_Prinny
Sonic screwdriver
2yr
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Nozomi_Masaru
came here cause of the title. the sound magic intrigued me...hope it turns out well
2yr
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Laighten
its being teased as a free read for me for the next 13 hours. you dont think i can read 350 chapters in 13 hours do you? well we're gonna find out
3yr
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Edward_Beisel
Just started reading this. Not bad so far, but plenty of grammar mistakes.
3yr
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EmzByte13
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
3yr
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