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Daoist721221
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camaztle
Great story, I would recommend you decide on a set up for speech, thoughts, action, location and things like that. When reading sometimes you can't tell who is talking and when they are done. Also the grammar is not great but it's mostly the phrasing or organisation of the sentence.
Good luck.
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Phil_Morris
this is a really good fanfic and the mc is overpowered since he has salazar, voldemort, and snape as personal teachers an can use parselmouth with his spells making them alot stronger this fanfic has alot of potential
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mluna9116
-Needs to work on grammer
-Needs to add some more detail to the events happening in the novel
-other than that this book is great
-But please do work on your grammar it gives me a bit of a headache trying to readπ
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Zoruja
Nice story man doesn't drop it !!!!! the story is going well so far just wish that there was more chapters out ππππππππππ
mc x hermione please :3
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Shadow_Kil
The story is interesting especially since he is the son of Voldemort not sure if I spelled that right but itβs an interesting change and I think the story is going well so far just wish that there was more chapters out
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Juwon_Oh
The story is great, and creative. The only criticism is that occasionally the grammar is off. The grammar mistakes aren't enough to kill the attraction of the story.
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Bu_M_Bu_Um
The story seems to have potential and honestly interest me but it is in dire need of an editor. It looks like it is copy pasted front Google translate.
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himailsatish
Excellent story is completely a new angle which most πππππ... expecting more .I hope Author doesn't drop the story.πππππππππππππππππππππ.All the best
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Qrb
There is potential, but I honestly can't read with so many grammar errors. Author should find a editor or fix it himself because I really is difficult to comprehend and read the way it is now.
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Feebling
Well what to say about this....Grammar? Ok...there are mistakes ( some small, some so great you can't tell what the "author" even means ) but this is fan-fic so a lot of stories here on webnovel are riddled with mistakes.
The thing that pisses me off, like REALLY A LOT are the names. Author can't spell names for sh*t. Sometimes the names are entirely different I mean - Gaunt -> Mrax.....how does that even happen? It is nothing like that....Of course grammar with names is also sometimes ****ed up by not using CAPITALS ( even with the wrongly spelled name I think i read "dombles" somewhere as well) .
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