Miranda makes me feels uncomfortable. Maybe it is just me but instead of cold machine I can not help but thinking that she is too close to human, it is as if she is a mad mother who takes human child as her own and insisting that the outside world are dangerous and 'her' own way are the only 'correct' way to protecting all those children. But when I saw the ending I think I undestand why. Because she learn from her 'mother' that believe her own thinking is also right hence why she let Miranda go. Solid 5* from me.
I really like the concept quite a lot! This seems like a real novel instead of a web novel with the quality of the writing! I like the concept too, but I don't want to spoil it too much - might be a little girl... might not... . Overall, it's definitely a fun past the first three to four paragraphs...
Would like to see the author challenge herself with faster pacing, but definitely seems like a good story so far!
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