by chance they don't know who the original author in Chinese is,
or where can I continue to see more chapters.
I've been looking, I can't find anything
I don't think this is translation at all, the author "KungFuFireflies" don't even exist in English nor Chinese. I have no idea what is going on here? nobody seems to know what the raw is or even if it exist.
IF! this is translation, then I rather read MTL, would be 10 times easier to read. BUT! there is also no MTL, so I don't think that this is translation, but a troll original work???
its has horrible translation quality. seems like you r reading it in mtl. what difference you have pay for reading but translation quality is equal to that of mtl? wouldn't it be better to read from there instead of reading here. waste of money
The translation is near impossible to read, the story feels disjointed and doesn’t flow at all. It feels as if things just happened. I personally don’t hate the cliche concept of the book, just the execution... well wasn’t satisfactory.
So this is an OK Novel, helps pass the time. MC is typical poor bloke in the beginning, but after getting the mall system everything turns out to be cool. Story is good. translation and editing are very poor.
the enemies too free to scheme,, and too long to live,, and the MC too weak with all advantage he have,, and too much enemies,, one problem not end and start with new problem.
Average story. Arrogance MC. Machine translation quality.
Not worth the time or money to read something this bad. If the translation was normal then it would have been a better story.
Way to many similiar names, especially ones that start with Z makes it confusing and hard to read without losing track of who's who.
One chapter I just read had 5 different characters with Z Names that where practically the same, super annoying to read.
If your going premium atleast get the chapters edited.
I get the part where your first language might not be English so its kind tough to get things done, but mate try using apps for the grammer atleast, there are plenty of them which can fix the endless amount of issues here and make this one more readable.
The translation is soo bad I don't understand why they even pay the translater for this mess. Maybe I would enjoy the novel more but whoever translated this mess literally makes everyone go read the plagiarized work Dawn of a new era just because people can actually understand it compare to this mess.
its a really good story but the editing is awful. I got to around chapter 400 before I gave up because the grammar, punctuation, and general flow were so bad. its a shame:(
Its a great story dont get me wrong but the author really needs a proofreader there are mistakes everywhere but other then that its really worth reading
I don't understand why people judge so negatively this novel so much. The translation is good, as is the stability of the update. It is a modern world, but what distinguishes it from ours are portals to another world. Various countries around the world resist the invasion of barbarians and evil gods. As you know, someone has to face them. So people who started to practice kung fu gained the power to resist their enemies. Our mc will gain a mysterious system that will put him to the test and help him on his journey to the top of kung fu and to protect what is dear to him.
Lets do it a screen junkie way.
Welcome to world of martial arts where everyone, like everyone is jealous of mc of his gains but they will do nothing to get it..like seriously if this was some other novels, he would already been killed several times over.
After reading world's best martial artist, you will started this sort of genre but then you will read this ****, which is like cheap RIP off of it. Think again, same friend, a little sister, a poor family, a system which works credit system, a university exam but ths also tried to make it original by adding weird sort of humor which you will rarely get, additional cliche added so bad that you could puke.
But our hero is a kind hearted guy who keep selling things for free for no reason. Like, isn't his family poor, so he should probably try to earn more but you will literally find a ch where the fat freind of his giving him money like 1 sixth of it and he still dont wana take it. Our hero is smart too, like he let's others decide what will be the price of the thing only available to him.
Ok..this wasn't as good as others..anyway..the story is slow actually. Like in some 50 ch..he has done these, a fight after a month or so, some fights, giving everyone medicine bag for almost free, a fight and an another fight three months later..finished...no proper improvement in the story
Ok...in last I would suggest you go read, world's best martial artist...its like upper version of this Novel, ch should be about 400 something...you will probably love it...just no racism...he haven't done that..but it's in modern world China so who knows...reputation isn't the best...we will have to see for...now just read that...
You know what... the quality of translation is at the level of machine translation... so bad translation isn't seen every day... one would expect more from official translation but I had the same feeling as reading on LNMTL
It could be quite nice novel to kill time - but the a horrible style of translation , or even it non-existence totaly stops me from going further with this novel .
Has potential but the grammar is so disturbing
Example:
Zhang Yihan sat up, and turned on the lamp and took a look. There was nothing special on the desk except for the stone he picked up
The stone was walking on his way home after school at night and suddenly hit him from the sky
Chapter 2
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-_- the stone was walking (the hell?)
Would have beet better if this was TLed properly..
This would easily break through 5m views here.
Was this MTLed?
I never read MTLed novels before but I think this is it.
I thought people were joking when they said MTLed novels can make you suffer when reading but they were right.
One good thing about the translation is that it makes it easier to read the MTL.
Updating stability is pretty good.
Story development is pretty much like any other novel, nothing novel.
Characters design is sub-par. Though most of the students seems to resemble real Chinese in their racist behaviour, that one is pretty spot on, they can be considered absolutely dumb, especially the MC. Selling a medicine which works absolutely insane and gave people great results for just 10k yuan when a generic medicine that does not even have half the effects of his are sold for 5k yuan. Add this to the fact that he can only produce 50 of those in a week, the price should absolutely be higher. Not only that, since he is a weak-a$$, he should have not sold the medicine like that as he does not have any means to protect himself from those that would want to get the formula from him.
World background seems okay as it is based on reality and not much needs to be done. But the name of the schools could have been better. It only feels like the author is trying to make Kung Fu above any other Martial arts.
All I can say is that, WBMA is a lot better than this. And thank God that this novel is not on NU, it would've been thrashed by the reviewers. Also, for something as bad as this, nobody, unless they are dumb would not spend their fastpass to read since it's locked from chapter 60 something.
What this novel needs is an editor. I like this type of novels and its frustrating to read a novel with broken words. The story has no problems so far till chapter 25
I've enjoyed the development of this story with the system providing strong but not completely overwhelming advantages.
The translation\editing can be a little clunky at times with some strangely constructed sentences being a little jarring.
The quality of the story gets you over the humps.
I love this story because im an aspiring martial artist, so even if it's more than slighty unrealistic comparing myself to a soon to be top of the world martial artist i still love the storyline, so keep on writing and i'll keep on loving it👍
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