Oh, I just binge read everything and I absolutely love it! I usually find it hard to write modern AU novels and I must say, you've written this well. I also like the main character, Canary: I hope happiness soon comes her way!
I like the story a lot and see a lot of potential in it! I think the main thing the story needs is quite a few more chapters and perhaps some more direct interactions between the characters.
I think it will keep better and recommend it!
Voy hasta el capítulo 2. Hasta el momento tiene un desarrollo decente de historia. Los personajes están definidos hasta cierto punto. La protagonista sabe lo que quiere y no parece sufrir secuelas **icológicas lo suficientemente preocupantes para llegar a una línea de venganza retorcida o hacer estrategias complicadas.
Glad I took the time to follow up on this novel. I really like the story so far and the contemporary feel. I'm excited to see how Canary and Avery(I'm assuming he's the main lead) relationship develops into snu snu~
Just wanted to say that I really like the story and where it is going so far. I really want to know more about the characters and especially the motivation behind them as well as what happened to her mother. Please make the chapters longer writer sama TT^TT
Excellent story... It has great twists and turns, and encourages the reader to read the next chapter. A legal drug of words. The plot is smooth, and doesn't jump at all. Your descriptions of the main character are also excellent. Great job
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Finally, something that isn't reincarnation or an isekai. Writing has minimal grammatical mistakes and the story is moving jlong quite nicely. The Prologue however starts of a bit odd, might want to change your starting sentence for something with more impact? Nevertheless, this shows promise. More character interactions can also improve the story. Keep on keeping on 👍
Nice story, haven't gone far but it's already nice. Love the storyline. Feel bad for the MC, Oh love her name by the way. Having ur sis take ur fiance. Well he wasn't worth it.
Let me just kip it brief, great work author.