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Glocc_Williams
If these four chapters is the start i cant wait til volume 2 is released. Whatever you do keep writing and publishing. Also a big thanks for the recognition.
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soulla
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Daoist903238
Some authors just have that magic that draws you in and makes you want to keep reading. This is one of those books. I’m not familiar with the genre but it doesn’t matter. Recommended.
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Kamatis
Yeet!!! Sorry for the late review, I fell asleep😂😂😂. Anyways, writing quality is nice and I didn't noticed any typos and wrong grammars, If there are, my eyes are getting vague, hahaha. I'm not really into cultivation novels, so I can't say If yours is unique. But still, you story has the same style as mine, hahaha. Trying to keep the slow paced, while building up to something in the end, hahaha. Good job for not getting excited while making this😂😂😂. Some authors are getting excited when writing, that's why their stories are becoming rushed. So like Webnovel, just be calm and write something. The MC is amazing and kind of realistic at the same time, he was portrayed nicely as long as the world he belongs in now. Keep up the good work!!!
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OopsWrongHole
I'm a big fan of cultivation manga and manwha, and this is the first novel that I've read. I've gotta say I really enjoyed it. It's super different to most cultivation stories, it's a bit more westernised and realistic but I don't mind that. I sometimes get sick of the way they talk in those stories, so it's kind of refreshing to have it be more realistic. I feel like the story is building up to something right now, and I'm looking forward to whatever it is! PLEASE get to the fighting, I can't wait!
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minho_Shiny
The first chapter got me hooked up and I wanted read more and more. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I liked the authors writing style.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more.
I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his hardwork.
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Lazy_leon
The novel is good. story is excellent.
Character development is also portrayed well.
Some might say why is Oscar asking si? isn't it normal for a normal person to doubt himself?
That's why I say character development is great.
The only reason why this novel isn't super popular is the amount chapter release in a week.
Overall a good word! :Thumb up:
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ruffatorres
This book is well-written with no typos and grammatical error. Reading the first chapter will piqued your interest and you will be inclined to read further to find out what happens next. I love how the writer uses every word to create magical sentence. The creativity that makes this boo was astonishing. A well deserved five-star to the hardworking writer.
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NotUse
Sorry for the late review. I woke up an hour ago and decided to read it right away. I will be doing an honest review for your novel, entitled: Cultivation Fever.
So, I am not a fan of cultivation novels, and it was quite hard to understand some of the terms used in this novel. (Pertaining to cultivation) Perhaps, you could describe them more for simple or casual readers like me to understand It better. (I'm not trying to be hash😊) However, for cultivation readers, you guys will extremely enjoy this book, so I suggest that you read it.
Still, the author's monologues in the first few chapters are amazing. The author "shows" rather than "tell" this grabs my attention the most. And plus, Oscar is an excellent name. I'm fine with monologues, even if they are heavy. I'm also fine with terms that are deep to comprehend since I use them too.
I have no right to judge the grammar of your book, since I'm also bad at it. Although there is a lack of descriptions when it comes to terms, the author explains every scenario or event vividly. I could portray the character's feelings and actions.
Stability of Updates, this is automatically five stars for me.
All in all, I highly recommend this novel to cultivation readers out there. Keep up the good work author and do your best!!!
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taxi_pineapple
I love your story! It’s got a great story line everything is on point! I don’t know how this isn’t popular yet! Good luck and good job author!
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mrmrcia
I'm quite disappointed with Oscar, character-wise. He didn't try to improve his lifestyle at the outset, yet had the guts to ask about what his family would think if he suddenly disappeared. Yeah right, Oscar, you should've asked that question to yourself instead of towards Sirius. Then, without qualms, he agreed to go with Sirius sans actually thinking apropos the repercussions. Though he made me wheeze at the "baby steps, baby steps" part, what an actual baby.
Helga is my favourite character by the way. I beg of you to let her appear more. :((
I truly appreciate that you took your time in describing the scenery, the events, and the minor details. Some authors tend to use just adjectives, and that frustrates me more than anything else. A cheers to you.
[[[ You'll hate me if you read this. Please don't.]]]
I am not well-versed with the world of cultivation, and I know that some of your future readers also won't be. Hence, it was a tad difficult to follow through with the actual process of cultivation. A lot of named techniques were not elaborated, so I didn't know of their main purpose. As a suggestion, please phrase it out like we're learning along with Oscar. (I'm quite stupid, so please pardon my obliviousness.)
There are minimal grammar mistakes. Minimal at best, but they somehow cut off the flow of some passages or hastens it. I noticed several punctuations misuse, overuse, and absence. However, as I've mentioned, the mistakes are minimal and can be easily proofread. Our grasp of the English grammar is not perfect :)
I have a feeling that this " 'Soul becoming world' constitution" would appear again, for some reason.
You have a very explicit way of narrating what's in your imagination. Very much appreciated. I'll be cheering you on. Sorry if I was of no help!
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DuskArcanist
Amazing cultivation novel. If you've ever read WMW or Combat Continent then you'll for sure love this one!
Writing quality is amazing for a cultivation novel (author probably not Chinese).
Amazing MC
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