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This work deserves a five star work. Just first two chapters are sufficient enough to rate this wonderful workpiece. The author has described the MC in an expressive way. The world background is fabulous. Thanks for creating this work.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Esoj
You should keep it up. It is a good story plot. A deviation from the normal story lines of web novels and xianxia stories. I am waiting for the next chapters.
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Elui
A good and refreshing story about a Moron/Naive in a cultivation story
The MC have only his detection of lie and with that he want to reach a greater strength and it's the difference between this and other cultivation story not scheming or false "good MC" .
The MC in this story is naive and that will create some new opportunities and other difficulty that don't have other MC for example :
If he want something he tell it ,unlike other cultivation story ,that don't revelate anything because of the sensibility of the information
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Nikhil_Chand
I am really really surprised that this novel isn't famous yet. I have never read such a cultivation novel in 5-6 years maybe I haven't read enough.....
So the story is about Li tian our MC. Currently he is 12 years old. Story starts when he is 5 yrs and then straight to 8 yrs when the real adventure/ misfortune/ fortune starts for MC. Our MC is naive and gullible. Maybe weak and timid. People might hate such personality but give it a read further in the story. Nope it doesn't improve except the weak and timid part. He has very very low IQ. You can understand it from synopsis.... MC has trash talent in cultivation, can't remember difficult things, doesn't like reading, writing or going school. He is pure hearted, kind. Only 1 childhood friend takes care of him, fights for him. MC is taken away on a trip by his parents and abandoned. He meets an injured super strong cultivator. Since childhood he read 1000 virtues book and decides to help him. Next morning he asks the strong person to be his teacher and although he found that MC is idiot he took him his disciple.
The strong cultivator took 1 year to recover and go to his continent. During that time he taught MC cultivation technique and most basic sword technique. When MC was left alone he met a strong dragon. Again the dragon found MC is idiot but teaches MC coz he was alone for 1000 years. 3 years later when dragon is about to die he tells MC his story and gives him a task. MC then goes out to and finds an academy test is going on. His talent is trash but his techniques and will power are amazing. He meets his childhood friend again.
Now, writing quality is good. Very very less grammar mistakes. You will find how pitiful the MC is by the way world treats him and laugh at those moments when people try to teach him since MC can't understand simplest of the things. Characters are good. His family members and juniors, as usual in any novel, despise MC because of his talent and IQ. Except them people shown are good and not 1 dimensional. World background shown is little as for now.
I have strong hope for this novel. Why? because I really cannot predict the future of MC. We have read many novels and most of the times we can predict what is going to happen and what path MC will take. In this case I cannot. Will he develop IQ or will he remain a moron? Will his talents improve, his spiritual root? will his comprehension increase? can he remember things? Only time will tell
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