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valiantxvillainous
A fantasy romance full of lighthearted humor and charm! This story was a really fun and easy read with cute heart-throbbing moments that make the reader clench their heart. I really enjoyed all the cute and funny references thrown here and there by the characters and the mystery behind the Moon Rabbit. At times there are expressions that are used a little awkwardly and the grammar a bit strange. But in general, the author writes in a very captivating and beautiful way, there were rarely moments where I found it difficult to understand. I feel like the characters and the story are in general were rather innocent. There’s almost a romantic and sweet naivety that clouds the entire piece. While at times enjoyable, I did find that the characters almost felt a little too childish and pure for my tastes. There were times I felt like they could use a little more depth. I found the beginning to be a little too slow and mundane for my personal tastes. It was sweet, but for around the first ten chapters, I felt like there was little to no conflict and I had very little reason to read the next chapter after the one that I’ve ready. The main character doesn’t seem to have a strong personality and seems a little directionless in her life. I hope she can grow more and show us a stronger personality as the story progresses! All in all, a very sweet and fun read. I recommend this title to those who like light-hearted romances with a pinch of fantasy elements. Good work, Author, and keep at it!!
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weeelizabeth
Wow! Simply 💗l.o.v.e.💗 this. 🥰😍😘 It's awesome🏅 and a real sparkling gem. Breathtakingly unique. A refreshing storyline too, about Bunny🐰Xue (Hint: see book title🤭). His love interest is a rather dense university student😇 who has attracted many other admirers. So certainly no lack of male leads here.😂 Currently this novel has way too little readership.🤔 So give this book a try!😊 At the moment, I have read till chapter 59. 🥰😍😘
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Lovelyn_8
Love it though the ending is sad🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
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Chang_mie
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swatiikakkr
wao a fantasy novel..... a story thats full if charm and a sight of humor also.....very well described characters.....good job by author....
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Koray_nox
Tho ik i wouldnt really Write a review bUt so far i just read it and The first Few Chapters are actually caught my Eyes And makes me wanna read more...and so i cant wait to read
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madskie00017
When a story offers a greats Fantasy-Romance plot, how can we resist? From synopsis itself, I already got interested. After reading few chapters already, it left such good impression that I could not resist to keep going per chapters. So, if you are looking for a great romance with so much interesting plot then this story is completely right for you. Keep it up! more please!
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MysticAmy
Once again, a nice story from deat Rachel~! 🥰 I like the writing quality of your novel. As I said with my other review, you have your own unique style and I like how you can describe scenes in details with great figures of speech and word choices~! Update stability is once again good! 🤩 You write three stories and update them which is a hard work indeed! Salute! I have read only 8 chapters, but the pacing is okay. I see that you have already 140 chapters and I know that it will not end yet and that the story won’t be rushed at all! I will update my review once I read more during my free time~! 🥰 Story development and character design is grate! TBH, I don’t know much about cultivation and whatnot but reading your story got me interested about it! Would definitely read more! As for character design, I like your characters and while I read it, it gives off a vibe of an anime setting. ☺️ Your story is interesting and exciting and I have more to unravel as I continue reading! World background, if I’m correct this story is the same world as Races Online? Han Jing is your ML there if I’m not mistaken? Anyway, if my memory serves me right, combining worlds from different works is great as it says something about your creativity! 🥰 Great job, Rachel! 🤩
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Henrique_Paiao
Xp 😗😋😙😎🤔😍🙂😊😗😜😏😣😝😏😣😛 😪🤐😜😫😜😫😜😘😗😃😂😚😆😋😙🤣😄😚☺️😅😚☺️😀☺️☺️🤔😍🙂☺️🤗😗😉🤣😘😆😄🤣😘😗😃😉😀😃😅😀😎😉😋😓😪🤐😙🤣😘😆🤣😘😗😃😉😂🤣😆😁😚🤣😘😗😋😙🤣😘😆😘😉😎😉😋🤔😆😋😍😎😚😋😋😘😙😘👦😙😎😘😙🤣😄😙😆😋😙😎😘😎😎🤔😉😃🤔😉😀😎😉😎😗😎
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mariskywhite
What more can I say? Lol this story deserves a 5 star. Well written, exciting, thrilling and humorous. I loved it and I'm sure you guys would love it too.
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koladeizdavid
This story is absolutely amazing! A ravishing gem amongst others The author uses precise details to depict the surrounds exquisitely. I love fantasy and this book is something I definitely would read over and over again without getting bored. Story is well-paced and the characters are lovable. Author's english is superb and this gives a smooth and enjoyable experience when reading. Also, the author's skill at giving descriptions is excellent and this evokes a beautiful mental imagery. Greatly interested to see where the story goes. Definitely a must read! 💯 What are u still doing reading this review? Go read once. More updatess author. 👍 ✌️
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Fatima_Salgado
This is really good I really recommend you read this book but on your own time cause it's so addicting. I love the story plot and the characters as well. 😊
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swatiikakkr
Well this novel definitely deserves around 5 starts, I a very story, interesting one... Both the characters are written very well... This is my new liking n I ll suggest everyone to read this novel
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revin_na
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Nick_Stratton
I love this series dont know when the second season will come out but they need to hurry it up man I can't wait much longer so I'm hoping they will continue the series and realise the 2nd season very soon.
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Bailey_Gattenby
WOW this novel was extremely thought through, before reading I was extremely unsure about my liking towards this Book, but it turned out to be Amazing. And I might just have do read it again!
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kuhaku_sora
I have yet to read most of the chapters, however I must say that I'm very intrigued based from what I have read. The chapter itself reminded me of an anime called "Your Name", but twas, what you've created, an indifferent story that made us readers indulged from the beauty of the meteors/asteroids--whatever we should call it. I'm very fond, not knowledgeable, but took a liking from the vast sky engulfed with celestial stars. And the moment you've written something so romantic something inspiring and something well-written is the STAR-t of something new (Oh my god, a pun mwahaha~)
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Norah_Koch
Creative. I haven't expected the moon rabbit to be so cute... then again, I kind of expected it. The story is as sweet as it can be... might give me diabetes. I love the dynamics of their relationships. Good going, Author-sama.
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Destiny_Aitsuji
Beep Boop! I'm here! Author is a friend of mine so I'm obviously biased. This is a special 5 star review for you, please don't slack off too much and I'm placed to announce that I've hit the 140 character requirement. If you're still reading this, you might as well go away because it isn't a useful review lmao!
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LostInFictions
The moon rabbit. It's a beautiful to concept to begin with. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the first seven chapters. This has been a refreshing read undoubtedly. As a scope improvement, there are some punctuation errors but nothing that would put you off. One edit would be enough to fix all of them. A couple of scenes could have been more elaborated, I feel but apart from that, this has been a lovely read. Go for this if you are looking for something light to read.
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Shining
Well, This is one deserves five star rating. Story plot is very well written. Grammer is exceptionally good. Now I'm completely into this stroy. Thank you author for your hard work to give us such an amazing story ❤️
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TokyoAnime_Seven
First of all I really like the writing style it's a bit different than others,after reading the first chapter it filled my heart with curiosity what happen next then what happened,it's like the book won't let you go till you catch up to the latest chapter. Nice Work Author.
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