Chapter comments on the chapter Beast gun of the book My Vampire System

hey guys I uploaded the unedited files by accident it should be fixed now

at last a gun.... I want a gun as a blood weapon.. just like quinns blood bullets

started with 50 men. but 10 were injured. so defeated demon tier with 40 men. but only Oscar survived. that's pretty impressive I think. considering Leo couldn't even scratch the eye-lid of the dead demon tier with his sword and chi.

a beast gun is definitely interesting and has a lot of possibilities can't wait to find out more about demon tiers though

ahhh

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Well it's interesting to find out that they were able to create a gun/ammo from beast crystals and that it is a one off. It should be interesting to find out what this Demon tier beast will look like and how Oscar survived the encounter.

always a campfire story with a bad end for everyone? at least in this story Leo survived. I'm not going to pretend to like Oscar, he is not a good guy. he is probably going to eventually tell the story of how he fed ten of his people to the demon tier beast to get a shot at killing it.

love these back stories of your universe jks

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This chapter needs some editing. Besides that it was good building up to how strong demon tiers are.

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huh

oh no

Wait, so Oscars real name is 9 Odysseus?

King of cliffhangers strikes again!

Yeah Ive never said that but beginninf of the chapter was bad. He wasted words repeating the same info multple times. Hopefully its a one off mistake.

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Thanks for the chapter JKS ❤