just re-read the story again and I still can't believe it's over. loved it from beginning to end and still miss new chapters coming out. give it a try, it may be frustrating at times but in the end the journey you took with su ping and his pets will be something you will not forget.
ok at first I hated the MC but after what happened by the major families, I get it I would do the same thing or worse lol over all a great book! only concern is the coin cost starting at chapter 703 or so that is making me not want to continue this book :(
The author is certainly good at keeping interest and I very much enjoyed the story. That being said it gets dinged for throwing around the idiot ball and often forgetting plot elements. For example MC was supposed to keep a reward if he stayed on the list for a month or something. Never saw him get a single one even after topping the list MC was supposed to spread the multiple small world cultivation method. Never did. I don't think the MC ever learned the advanced knowledge from the system. At one point he could have likely just transmitted a perfect law to a pet and instantly complete professional training but it never occurred to him. Claiming to care about his strength but never filling his pet slots.
The pet store became a complete afterthought after a certain point. He's just going through the motions.
I read this book after it ended and I have to say I loved it. I haven’t cried more during any other book I have read the bond between a pet and it’s partner is truly beautiful
I feel so stupid reading this. The world building is nice but there are inconsistencies with the novel. The writer makes you feel that something is important and the next thing you know everything about that chapter was discarded like trash or never happened to begin with. I cant stop reading now since im invested but i recommend finding a different novel since this is trash.
I finished the story and what i can say about this is that the plot suffers from overstuffing the MC with power ups, so much so that the author sometimes forgets that he wrote that. Examples would be :
1 . The dragon legacy that MC got in his original world . Part of the deal was to take the soul/legacy of the dragon back to its original world to be buried but MC never got to do it. Not to mention the countless treasures he got but never used.
2. The Green Lady pill that he got as a store attendant . Part of the promise was to go to the undead realm but MC never took her there.
3. The pills that he got from Ye Chen. Never heard from them again.
4. The Chaos dragon pet that he had was not in the final battle. Where did it go?
5. When he became an Ancestral god the first thing he did was to wage war with other clans, what happened to finding the demigods burial when you become an Ancestral?
6. He got a student but never really interacted with her, much less taught her anything. He basically dumped teaching her to another guy and she was never heard from again.
All in all, while I enjoyed the story. The plot is too dragged on in the middle and too rushed at the ending. There are many instances that the author have forgotten that he wrote about them.
One of the best novels I've ever read. There were moments where I feel like I was there and I can feel the emotions being portrayed or narrated in the story. Would be nice if there were some additional or bonus chapters. We all know who that person at the end is and honestly, it would be great what reactions will Joanna and the others convey if they saw him. It's really a great story. I recommend it. To the author: Thank you for making such a great novel. It is debatable for others, but it is a masterpiece for me.
In this novel pretty looking but disgusting personality girls (only girls) will be spared and join mc, even if they had killed innocents. Mc states to have a moral and a just character but only against men
Eu adorei a obra, comecei pelo manga e depois descobri que existia a webnovel, foi as melhores 3 semanas de leitura, o final foi algo totalmente inesperado, os últimos 20 capítulos chorei todos, obrigado autor por essa obra, tocou meu coração com ela.
I have read many novels, yet this one has a special place amongst all of them. I had a lot of fun reading, the development was good it had a bit of twists which made it even more interesting. I was able to feel the emotions of the characters and the world . Truly an amazing novel I am thankful for finding and reading it.
I really enjoyed this book. I thought it was a fun read and worth finishing. I would recommend this book if you don’t mind a few problems. The book is inconsistent. Characters will jump levels and teleport between places as though the author forgot their plan and needs a convenient solution to a problem. Also, this book gets its word count up by having everything the main character does absolutely blow everyone’s minds. And when their minds are completely it merits being said twice. That said, if you can tolerate these things, this is a fantastic pet novel that scales at a decent pace and is actually finished.
This was an amazing read it starts with a shameless character getting a second chance and ends with him knowing himself. It’s action packed and really hits the heart. A great read in my personal opinion
This book has a great story development over the few pages i have read and the how they use technology and astral pets in this fictional book is great.
This novel is a great read that has both plot and character development throughout the story. The story has a bunch of misunderstandings, and it's funny how the m c goes along with them and how everyone thinks they know what Is true. The protagonist is both funny and serious at times when needed to. Toward the ends of this book, the story does pick up pace, making the ending feel almost rushed, which could have been stretched out to include more chapters. Even though the author did rush doing this story, he did explain almost all his mysteries throughout the story closer to the end. The ending leaves you with a feeling of I would say happiness, anticipation mixed in with some sadness while also leaving you guessing what actually happens if the story actually had a chapter or two more. I definitely recommend this novel to anyone who wants to read it. Just give it a try to let it grow on you, and you won't be disappointed.
P.s. Author, what ever happened to the girl and flaming tree?
I really enjoyed this book and i know it’ not for everyone but the world building and character development is nice. The author does forget about some things he wrote and the ending isnt good but this book is definitely one of my favorites. The revenge scenes definitely were worth the time spent reading.
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