Reviews of Phone App: Portable Armory by MaxwellKHA - Webnovel

This story has a pretty good system, that I'm surprised that no one else has thought of it. The story is like most system stories, which is cool and all. But the thing that makes me want to continue reading this is the system. I haven't read any system stories as of late, and this might be able to scratch my itch. Thanks, author for sharing your story.

The story has a cool premise and the system seems unique as well. The author seems to have done a lot of research regarding guns and the like, so good job, author! One thing I have to say though is that the story needs some proofreading and some extra details. The plot seems to go a bit too fast; it would be better if it was slowed down a bit. Good luck author! :)

Best System i ever Read about. Story had potential but was bogged down by rushed writing and pacing. Full of Plotholes. Characters make no sense, act like Teenagers but kill without remorse. Story development is meh. I only read it because it is the only story with such a setting. 2/5 Had potential, got ruined by bad writing.

The novel is a great idea and has potential but it also has many flaws like the insane behavior of the mc along with the fact he is a student that magically knows how to behave like a soldier and use weapons like one and their are other issues but I’m not gonna get into those

I love this novel. I hope will continue............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The tags say that the story is yuri, but as far as I have read the protagonist is a man, has anyone read the story? They know what gender it belongs to if it is yuri or not.

Overall, this is a good novel and anyone who love guns will definitely like the novel. (if you came here to read the gender bender part, start reading at chapter 37 that's where the gender bender started)

Great book I would definitely suggest reading it. I told everyone I know to read it and they all loved it. It is so good my family wants to read it out loud on YouTube. So that even more people want to listen/read this book and support the author.

I f**king tried to read it and can't understand a single thing. What is the nature of the system? How is every Tom, Dick and Jerry gained access to it? I mean seriously, the whole thing is a mess.

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All in all, a good story. Now to fill in the characters..................................................................................................................................................................................................

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It’s a good book but I have some problems -chapter update aren’t that much I’ve waited a week but not even one chap -I understand that u wanna make the characters cool but the drinking and the smoking part is kinda annoying me (not kinda, ALOT) -it would really help if u could post pictures of the stuff you include like the guns

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This has been a great read so far and the plot is pretty original Plus the detail about weaponry is very detailed... all in all worth the read

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Welp this is one hella nice of a story the chracter developement back ground so its really good👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

The story seems nice with a uncommon system that I personally have not seen before. But unfortunately its a real pain to read due to bad editing and some grammar mistakes, Hopefully Author-san can get an editor to make it more smooth to read, until then thats the best I can say...

this is one of my favorite books and i useually don't like books so I would highly recommend this book as long as your fine with shooting guns

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This is a good story nice character design and story development is good and Updating is top notch but this is nice so good job👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Im suprised how fast this character developement but you need to work on your grammer especially on who is the she or he but this is a good story

Personally couldn't make it past the first few chapters. The MC was poorly characterised and was thrown into a gunfight in the first 5 minutes of the novel, only to show "poor aim" headshots and killing 20 people by the end of the 2nd chapter completely on his own. Give this one a miss, there have to be better ones out there than this.

Listen. I'm a simple man. I see Gender-Bender anywhere in the story, automatic >4 stars. The story was good, and I could tell the author really like writing about guns. The characters aren't like flat cardboard cutouts, and unlike almost all the books on this platform, some actual fücking thought has been put into character dev. The one issue I have with the book are the grammar mistakes. While they don't render the story unreadable, still makes it hard to enjoy a fight scene when a sentence that is clearly a run on sentence disrupts your reading experience completely I like cheese.

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