Reviews of The inmortal by Genardy_Robles - Webnovel

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The story has an interesting plot but the grammar is very bad. my greatest dislike is when females are referred to as males. the 'he' and 'she' are constantly being mixed up. throwing this into something like MS Word would fix most of the grammer issues.

You have my attention now continue what you're doing.