honest review I'm giving here is that the kid is like not even 16 and ur trying to make him build a harem it is just really cringe getting Cynthia b/c she has no love interest in cannon was ok but everything else was just so forced and cringy and i only read up to the point were he just officially caught his pokemon.
I love your work so far. The pace of the story could speed up a bit. Not to the point of skipping over important bits of the story but enough to make it so you say what theyβre doing and then skip over the hows and the detailed parts if that part makes it hater for you to release chapters. I love your story and want to read more of it even if the quality takes a few hits because your story is just that good.
I was wondering when you were going to update again . I really love reading your story . I just wish you could write and update faster. Anyways keep up the good work that you do and thanks for the amazing story so far.
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After reading this fanfic, I finally understood perverts from the highest degree. This story although well written, does not translate to good plot. I dare say this story only focuses on one thing, harem. That is because there is lack of progression before his Pokemon journey at 16 years old.
Do you see the problem? He gets his starter too early and decides to not train it meaning he willingly sabotaged his own starter's growth. Even the knowledge he learnt during the years just seems inadequate. Maybe this is because the writer did not have enough knowledge in Pokeverse?
This fanfic has such a good starting point that may even use my stones on it but sadly it started to go downhill from there. Various plotholes that didn't even explained properly, weird character interaction and lack of growth of the character in terms of mentality.
i feel like this story has potential to be a Good 18+ pokemon novel MC gets a System usual stuff but hereis where good part ends the system sucks all it can do look at stats n store items and do quests which give BS rewards like RL money n pokeballs nothing to Evolve pokemon maybe down the road author decides to add more to the system i see it as a pointless thing that just doesnt deliver to this type of novel he doesnt even use system in general
is good very very very good,incest good, milf good, r-18 (coming soon),Serena loli very good, I super recommend gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Heads up! Itβs a Pokemon Harem fic. Not sure how thatβs going to work but Iβm out, just for those who donβt know what world itβs going to be set in as it doesnβt say
Nice awesome wonderfull amazing beautifull bezt novel good writing all anime better than anything good fantastic japanese chinese korean webnovel novel manga anime cartoon
I like the whole character development first unlike any other fics. Also I has a great potential to be a popular and great story. Keep up the good work!
If I was actually here for the story then my review would've been a bit different.
But since I'm here for the harem. I can proudly say that you, my guy, is a true man of culture (like myself).
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Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood.
I have created over a thousand useless reviews.
Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality.
I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews.
Yet, these hands will never hold anything.
So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
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This story is still in its forming phase but it is well done so far..........................................................................................................
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