I really wish author would not drop this book and continue.. It is a nice one. Good plot, nice title I like the cover as well... Sighhh authorrrr! !!
Come on out.
The Princess truly is a strong and elegant main character to the story. I love the flow of writing which makes this an easy read and I'm interested to see where the story will lead. Good luck to the Author and keep up the amazing work!
So far, a promising read. The plot is intriguing, as well as concept. Text is understandable, but I would find myself rereading to get the gist. I suggest changing some sentence structure would do the trick. The narration could use some proofreading, since some transitions are rough.
Overall, an interesting read. Keep up the good work.
Job well done so far! Eagerly waiting for more updates... The story flow is smooth and the characters are designed well. This novel has great potential. Good work author! Cheers!
Happy writing!
Nice start, showing the loving relationship between the father and daughter even after his demise.
Nice synopsis, I must say it got me hooked, I really want to know who betrayed her.
Good description, and dialogue, author is trying. Just starting so I can't say much about update stability but carry on.
Good luck with spirity. You have my votes.
Nice start author. I have read the previous work and I love the fact you are editing it to give your readers a better read.
Nice synopsis, not your normal cultivation rebirth novel, this time she reincarnated 8 years back.
Your writing quality is good, well just starting again but do hope updates are consistent. Nice description..
Good work author, keep it up.
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