Nice so far.
He should train harry though.Nice so far.
He should train harry though.Nice so far.
He should train harry though.Nice so far.
He should train harry though.
Overall a good book, despite some errors in timeline (which most people don't put a great importance on) its pretty good. It's fast paced and some changes that everyone wanted to happen except somethings didn't change.
one of the best fanfic on harry potter if not the best i have ever read
i love the mc he is ruthless, determinate, human ,strong but not op and the author have let the magic do like in rowling book and have not modified it like other fanfic whose mc didn't need to attend school because they have better method (like overpowered intend and will) than the teacher.
thank for work awesome story
Wonderful book.... I thoroughly enjoyed it.... I mean this is one of the best books of Harry Potter fanfic.... The way his character developed is fantastic... I shall await for future chapters......
please don't make the mc miserable and lonely like Snape and give him some happyness and a companion
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Story was great until the The mc girl got the Cruciatus curse and then the story went downhill. he went to grindlewald to for help and then instead of the mc getting hos legacy she will. he beat belletrix early in the novel and was shown to be wayyyyy ahead of everyone but later in the novel he gets super nerfed lol honestly the story was a 5/5 before the girl got messed up. Its a remove from the lirbrary for me now
Great so far.
Great plot and story.
Cant wait for more.Great so far.
Great plot and story.
Cant wait for more.Great so far.
Great plot and story.
Cant wait for more.Great so far.
Great plot and story.
Cant wait for more.
One of the best fan fics I've read so far keep up the good work
Not like other **** stains the call fanfics where M.C IS A F*****MARRY SUE WITH A OP SYSTEM AND SHIT
This is so good. Better writing and good plot.
Cant wait for more.This is so good. Better writing and good plot.
Cant wait for more.This is so good. Better writing and good plot.
Cant wait for more.
Great story! I love the fact that mc is following in the footsteps of Voldemort! Perhaps mc will be more successful than he ever was with his flawed ideology. Perhaps mc as a muggle-born could create his own organisation like Grindelwald of 'wizard superiority' or something like that which would stop nonsensical wizard racism towards each other and look at future muggle threat or something. It would be kinda boring and sad if mc suddenly becomes goody 2 shoes or a muggle lover. I mean in modern times a single smartphone video of wizards could expose their whole world.
This looks really good. Cant wait to read more.
This looks really good. Cant wait to read more.
This looks really good. Cant wait to read more.This looks really good. Cant wait to read more.
So far I think the novel is great
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So far I think the novel is great
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