It was really good i can't wait till more plz upload more plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππPlz plz upload more
Well its a good story so far and the mc is also op which is contradicting the title. English could improve a lot, sometime had trouble understanding the sentences. Overall its an OK fan-fic.
How could someone with so many powers and a longinus level sacred gear not be overpowered?! And i think it would ve better It you used some sort of application to correct the grammar.
This is a great story.
The plot is developed very well.
The OC is not stupid, so itβs already very good. for me you don't have to be the smartest, just not being a donkey or an idiot.
The OC has been training very early, to increase and control his power, it is not just got strong.
Relationships are being built on a foundation, it is not what "are found today, and one says: I like you. And another: you are the love of my life.
I really like Dxd.
Congratulations on the story.
There is NOT 'not too OP', OP is OP there isn't middle ground...
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