The reason why I gave 5 Star rating, perhaps because, I encountered way lot of 2nd and 3rd rate Isekaai Web Novel.
This Novel Isn't bad, I could say It has potential.
The plot progress at a decent pace.
The main character is not the same old generic MC from a regular Isekai trope.
He is not an Otaku, Wooh! Yep, he is not one.
MC is your regular senior high school student who is about to take a college exam.
But fate brings him way a lot more.
His characterization inside the story fitted the description of a "normal person".
Which is pretty much refreshing.
I'll tell you this. I've read way lot of Isekai trope with wanna-be 'Normal Person' MC.
Only in this novel, I saw a reaction of a person fitted to be "normal."
Unlike any of those, I've read thus far.
The MC here is way more much better than those guys.
Well, I can't judge this novel as a whole given the few numbers of the chapter, nevertheless, It has potential.
Congratulation author for doing a Good Job. I hope you can keep it up. π
So Iβm currently 40 chapters into the story.
I initially started this webnovel because I saw it under the βPotential Startersβ section and tapped on it on accident.
Quick notes on rating
Writing Quality:
4/5 on writing quality, the only reason i put this is because there are some awkward sentences. However this is near the first 10 chapters and it doesnβt really affect the readability of the novel.
Stability of Updating:
5/5
Story Development:
5/5 Do not sleep on the potential of this novel so far. The intro is a bit slow and generic, but once MC gets isekai(ed) the story dramatically picks up. I would say the pacing of the novel is excellent. However powerscaling might seem like an issue. Idk yet, not that far in.
Character Design:
5/5 I love the MC. Heβs not cocky, heβs not crazy, heβs not stupid, and heβs very human.
Iβve enjoyed every character thatβs been introduced so far, thereβs not a bad character yet.
World Background:
5/5 Za Warudo is still building. The environment created by the characters and the fantasy genre in general, helps fill the holes.
I would definitely recommend reading this novel. Even if this story ends incomplete at chapter 40, I would say that it was better than some isekai anime adaptions.
Iβm looking at you βSmart Phoneβ and βDeath Marchβ. Iβm looking at you.
Dear readers, I thank you for giving my book a time to read. I will only leave this review so that you guys can comment the question you have to my novel and suggestion you have in mind.
Have a great day! πβοΈβ€οΈ
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This novel is not bad for beginners and I think the only thing I find to be poorly done is the updating stability. that was pretty much it. thank you for reading this review π
So far this book hs been a great read. the mc is developing decently. The story has a few gaps here and there in my personal opinion. But the author makes up with great detail of out afterwards.
What may seem a good story is utterly lacking in details or depth. This is a novel more suitable for minors as it passes over any sort of descriptions of what's happening and just is. Quite disappointing alongside the 1 dimensional characters make this far from being a five star work. That said, if you like beta power fantasy then this is your novel.
This novel has a good plot and its carefully narrated. Its just that it lacks the charisma of an MC that I am after. But its still good where you can enjoy the development of our Protag.
the book was good besides the misspells here and there. the author should make more chapters, i got done reading this within three hours. keep up the good work.
The cover art looked nice so i gave it a chance...
Decent read nothing particularly bad or good enough to keep me hooked so i didn't go any further that chapter 52.
That being said...
My Rant:
The MC- This guy is somewhat disappointing IMO, other people might be fine with it but it just annoys me, at the beginning he goes to the village after using the excuse of monster attack. The people believe him because there really are monster attacks but then he proceeds to go out without a weapon to defend himself on the very same day?
SP - These are super important to his growth and he only gets them when he levels, assuming it gets harder to level up the higher his level goes why would you waste it on simple mana replenishment? As a adventurer he should have at least secured potions that can replenish mana!
Guild Master Rosie - I don't remember if i spelled her name right but in the first 50 chapters shes the only guild master that's been mentioned, It would have been good if the Author made it that she has some special Aura that causes people to become attracted her or something but the MC seems to lose all sense of reality in front of her 'Beauty' and he so far seems to be the only one.
Romance - That chick in his group that suddenly fell in love with him just feels extremely out of place...i mean they knew each other for a few days if i remember correctly so it seems just too rushed. Should have waited for at least a few more interactions between them with a possible backstory (Tragic one maybe?).
His few weeks training - This guy only learned two skills? I get it he was raising his archery mastery and how to survive and fight with other weapons but i mean he only learned shock arrow which i'm assuming came from his master and then he created his own skill...but hear me out real quick...he has a system that allows him to master stuff easily so how the hell did he only get one skill from his master unless this entire time he just wasn't using them which would be even worse.
Hi author! As promised (in the server if you can remember I Am Cat Shark lol), I'm here to give you a **, but I would also like to leave a review! Your first paragraph got me hooked, I really love descriptive paragraphs in novels since it can make imagine the world of your character! I also like the story and its pacing! Great job!! πΆ
It's good with normal boi without any special knowledge regarding transported into another world, the story and pacing is good I like it. But I can't help but to hate the character of mc, pixie and alina or whatever her name is... I'm irritated with stupidity of mc, not my cup of tea with how mc and his braindead pixie having low int. It's deserve to get 5* but I won't recommend it to my friend. I like how realistic aldin or whatever his name is to abandon mc and stupid alina, I like their personality outside combat tho maybe I'm too harsh with newbie adventurer? But wtf they're doing there, absolutely unbelievable Mc is always overconfident and need to be half dead before realizing how stupid he is.
I want more I really got lost in this story which is something I seldom do I absolutely love Kiro and his friends as well as his master I'm so looking forward to more of this story
really good book. the mc is jus a regular dude tryna live his life. would reccomend if your in to the isekai thing and novels of course:). only thing is it needs more chapts!
Language translation issues continue with this chapter as well. While it does not render the chapter illegible it does make the flow suffer. This ultimately detracts from the story because english readers have to constantly think "what did the author mean here".
Its a book for children. Don't read if you expect a grand plot or lots or details. Its very light novelish. Its an op mc in a new world. Standard stuff
You get 5 stars and I get exp that is the deal, no take backs.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OHH!!! LOVE IT THE BACK GROUND OF THE STORY AND THE STORY ITSELF IS SO INTERESTING THIS GIVE ME A VIBE TO THE GAME OVER WATCH! HAHAHAHA ππ π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπππππππππ
This book is getting more awesome by the chapter and Iβm hoping to read more of it later on. Donβt stop writing man; keep going for it even now today.οΏΌ
Hey author is there any romance because it does say isekai and most of the time that means harem but I donβt care if it is harem one way or the other I just need a little bit of romance though
The author spin a tale of wonder and mystery with every word. You will always be left with wanting more and more and want to see the growth of the characters
Hmm, I can't say anything about this novel actually...
The concept of the novel is fine, and the grammar is not problem in here.
This is your isekai novel right here, but this novel is a bit slow paced at the beginning, so you have to hold yourself and be patience before judging this book.
Because if you've patience enough, you will unconsciously just press that next button over and over again.
Well, I haven't keep up with this novel, so I want to do that after I write my first impression here,
See ya!
Perverted_Old_Man