Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 20: Children in Shadow 1 of the book A New Player In The Force

Thanks for the chapter. It's an interesting take on things, certainly more sensible than some other SW fanfics on here. Small suggestion for future ideas: there were several branches of Jedi around the Clone Wars, even one who belived that getting married brought you closer to the force. It's mentioned in the Republic Commando novels by Karen Traviss. Maybe introduce Ani to them?

Yes I love this fanfiction I'm reading it on fanfiction and when I say this I was like isn't that and I read the synopsis and it said it wasn't yours and had the link and I was like it is

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Thanks for the read!!

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