Lol I really like this story cause it's just downright crazy, I mean u got killer chickens and fat guys and what really gives this story its charm is the really depressing and overall sad background but then u just have a really comedic setting as if the whole thing is a big joke lololXD
Keep it up, Mr. Potato, I give this story 4 out of 5
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I'm still laughing my arse right now that the chicken had all along plan his death 😂
Now it made me really hungry.
The expression's great, and the overall comedic start is awesome~
Firestar_the_Alpha