There are a few minor things that make the story worse, like the grammar. It can be fixed here and there, but other than that, it is pretty good. Updates come out frequently, Story is somewhat interesting, the Character does reveal his powers slightly at the start, but he doesn’t reveal his whole advantage in the world. And the world background is solid. Hope to see more of this in the future.
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