Okay in chapter 13 i said I'd be back to review again so here I am
Writing quality (4/5): It's good, understandable and minimal grammatical errors. There are just some typographical error, but bearable. I think you should do some proof reading first before you release the chapter.
Stability of update (5/5): I have nothing to say here as author always update daily.
Story Development (5/5): In all honesty, I'm not into the courting process, if you wanna date, just date and not be hard to get.
The development between Alexander and Sabrina is just right for me (PERSONAL PREFERENCE) it's not too pushy nor awkward. The chemistry between then is just so good! Never awkward. And also I love how this story is different from other romance stories here on WN.
Character design (5/5): I love how the author plays with the emotion of the readers, it's so on point. Like you will really feel the hatred and love for a character. For example Jacob, I felt pity for that man but felt disgust instantly. You get my point? But yeah, please don't add anymore characters for now as it may get messy, I like how it is right now.
World Background (5/5): Author provides necessary descriptions for each setting, its not hard to imagine the place they are in. So i gave 5 stars.
Looking forward for more. I want dem cute scenes between Sabrina and Alexander. Also from Kenzie and Grey.
This is a good book π Hope you guys enjoy it as how I enjoyed reading it π
Honestly, this is one of the novels that I keep on reading ceaselessly. I just love how bright is playing with the readers' emotions with her utterly immersive dialogues and descriptive narrations.
Although Alexander's love for Sabrina is bountiful, it's bordering the obsessiveness line that it's quite thrilling. (Sabrina, you're the envy of most women). They are a couple who could use a little bit more communication in their relationship and a brief window to breathe from each other. Nevertheless, their love for each other is a pleasure to read.
As for the other characters that stuck to me, it's probably Jacob. Frick him and his entitlement. Valerie is freaking sobbing you lil piece of s h i t.
The pacing of the story is the best that it could be, almost to the point that it doesn't need consideration because the passages just flow smoothly.
Aside from the occasional misuse/absence in punctuations, I barely found any grammatical mistakes.
Overall, this was a wonderful read to me, being that it made me feel the love between the two mains. The drama is on point, and most often that not, heartbreaking and relatable. I'm gonna continue supporting you! ALL HAIL YOUR HIGHNESS, LURKER III.
Hi guys, Author here! So I just want to give you guys a heads up on what to expect from this novel. (sorry for the shameless review)
1. The book might contain SOME (SOME) R-18 scenes, so if you're a pure minded person or you're not into mature content, you can choose to skip them while reading or just not read the book at all.
2. The development between the FL and ML is fast paced. So if you're into the traditional stuff, like the woman should be hard to get or something, this may not be the book for you.
3. ML is very possessive and bossy in the first chapters. May cause some trigger to others. I'm reminding you already in advance.
4. In the future chapters, there might be major misunderstandings between the ML and FL, so if you guys are not into those stuff, please don't read the book.
5. Update is daily so don't worry :) - (most likely 1-2 chapters per day)
If you have questions, feel free to ask and I'm going to answer all of them <3 I hope you enjoy the book! Happy reading!
It was good then the author decides to space e v e r y s i n g l e w o r d and repeat chapters. Don't bother reading. The author never finished the storyline, the spacing will give you a headache, and the repeated chapter is a waste of time and coins.
I just read few chapters of this novel and i find it interesting. I feel that i might be hooked up. I just hope that the update is stable and author will continue until the ending.
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They novel is good but am being discouraged to continue reading because u keep updating an existing chapter. If it will take a month or two to bring an update I think it's far better than updating same chapters. Thanks for the work so far.
I love the storyline... love the characters and the flow of the story and how it keeps the action moving, but the grammatical errors make it difficult to read at times. Repeating of chapters and losing money and fast pass for it... the letter spacing makes it hard to read as you get further towards the later chapters... It is a great story though, would read more of this authors books.
Authorβs book started out well and interesting. As the book progresses, the author clearly does not care about formatting errors or proofreading her work. She has posted duplicate chapters multiple times (wasting our coins and fast passes), the formatting errors make the book difficult to read, and many grammatical errors make this book frustrating to read. The storyline is great, but because of the problems I listed above, Iβm too frustrated to continue reading this book.
okay so I was really living this book with all my heart. I did not mind the two first mistakes the writer made whuxh caused the readers almost 14 coins lost just like that for zero content in the chapters ZERO.
The author said she would make sure to find a way to repay us but she/He did not. I thought thatβs okay, no big deal ahe must already be very busy with having to write a book, everyone makes mistakes right.
However, updates are not always timely, no mass release as author had promised.
To make things worst, the fint of the chapter changed around chapter 150 and since then every chapter is like that. I have writen at end if chapter to bring this to her/his attention but no reply and no efforts to correct the issue. Those chapters are so hard to read due to the spacing. itβs More than 4 chapters so at this point it almost feels like it is intentional from the author.
Before anyone gangs up on me, Let me make this clear that I absolutely loved tHe book especially because it was not a slowburn book. but at this point I just give up, I canβt waste coins on something I can barely read.
I liked this book in the beginning, i like the development and interaction between the ML and the MC. But why do you need to add friends teaming up against them to break them up because you like one of them?!?!? can't you just wish them happy?!?! if you truelly like them, you wouldn't do anything that hurts them, you would wish they stay happy and never becoming hurt and sad:(
Fantastic read so far! If you like drama, a little bit of mystery along with revenge then this is the story for you. Itβs a pretty fast paced straightforward read. The characters are pretty interesting and the story is intriguing to suck you in. Great job so far author. Love your writing style β€οΈ
nice character and story.... the writing clearly and easy to read.,.. the story in this book also easy to understand and related each chapter... nice job and keep writing...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wish you coyld buy a book for a set price It really is to expensive especially when you have To Wait on chapter UPdates The book is a goos read if yiy have time to wait to get more couns to reas without spendinf all youR money
This book is so good im hooked i cant stop reading this book like all im ever doing is reading this amazing book i sont ever what to stop i hope this book goes on FOREVER
I really like this story, how the male lead Always protect the female lead , their love for each other though it has not been long since they both start dating , but i Hope Diego will soon live the strong because i don't want anything to happen to Sabrina and Alexander
after I first got this webnovel. it's the first novel am reading and am really enjoying it.
notably the first novel in my lifetime.
Love it[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Sure enough with the cover page the book seems to be interesting, though haven't gone far but I know its far way interesting
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Enjoyed reading this book. Towards the later chapters it seemed like the book was repeating several chapters but I would follow the updates to see where the story finishes
The writing quality could use some work but overall I love this book. I was hooked by the first 2 chapters . The only thing that I don't like was the fact that I lost a couple of fast passes with some chapters, I wish I would have been given a heads up. Hopefully the author will fix them.
I was apprehensive when I first read this... yes, ML is a predictable CEO whilst the FL is an innocent but spunky lady. Good suspense that adds to the development of the story and characters. Clever thinking of the ML - making him an invincible man, but with a heart just for his woman. Easy read, but can use some copy-editing to make the copy sing.
Donβt even bother with this one! I have wasted fast passes and coins on this book all because the author is technically challenged! π€¬ Started put good but there are 3 entire chapters that are messed up and have not been fixed.
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