It started really good I thought I found another good novel but till now iam still waiting for the so called powerful couple to strike but β¦ nothing
You hve all ingredients with evil people but itβ just so silly
I hve to say I skipped some chapters right iam almost at 300 but still no retaliation from the main lead plus too many characters for what purpose ? !
Anyway I donβt know if I will reading it as there are so many novels to check out
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I started reading this because it was supposed to be a no misunderstanding, girl n her romantic imagination kind of story.
After reading 85 chapters, free by the way, I didn't gain anything that couldn't have been completed in 20! It's long winding too much fluff. It might get interesting later, but nothing is keeping me in the book now!
i really really like to read this one the story plot was just light my preferred novels live how the story flows even the characters no depressing chapter just happy
Is it me cos i find these new updates boring the thrill i get when i started is kinda fading away. Author do smth let it flow like it was from the beginning to the end
This novel is fantastic! From the very first chapter, it directly immerses you. The characters are just amazing and so is the writing. At first, I intended to give the lovely author some positive and negative points to help them improve but I simply do not know how to further improve this, I'll keep reading this for sure!
A novel that is really worth to read. Love the characters and developing chemistry between ML and FL every time they encounter. And the writer describe skill is very very good. I just lost on own world when reading and couldn't help to image everthing and every scene perfectly. Good job!
a very enticing synopsis. a very interesting plot. a very praise worthy storylines. a male lead that makes reader hope of a mr. right. a female lead to admire... a perfect combination
a very well n properly written synopsis....a flawlesswriting, vry nice story description of characters are nicely done in short a great effort by author
The story is really good. So many secrets. and It's unwrapping one by one. The interaction between the ml and fl is also really cute and sweets. And their relationship is developing constantly. Not like the usual insta-love. Totally recommended!!!
What will happen when a novel maniac like us fall in love?!
This novel is too good to be true . I just today berated myself for not writing a review soon π€¨
And you will both the ml and fl . They both are not the typical cold CEO . They are fun actually and I laughed a lot ,I should say hearing their own thoughts .ππβ€οΈβ€οΈ
The novel started well
The writing style of the author is good ,
But then what's so different about this every character has same old character design. same old CEO ml whose features are damn similar other MLs and same emperor like character too hats off
I had many hopes
Ps. Reading too many novels only make u roll your eye over the similarities of plot with other novel and make you crave for difference π ( I think it's just for me coz neither new or old readers nor the novel loving MC who has many fantasies will agree with me)
I literally fell in love with this book. It is so amazing that I can't get enough of it. The characters are so good and the writing style is also very amazingπ. The leads what should I say about them even if I want to describe I can't cuz you should read this to know and to understand them . This book contains a high level of humor that I love π . There are not many books which contain this type of humor. It makes laugh and smile so much. In a romantic book it is not only about romance and love it should contain humor too which this book has ...
Author thank you so much for writing this wonderful book πππππππππ
Starting with a good synopsis, and then a romance story with twist and turns. It was a good ride. The author also wrote this story in a unique way. He/she separate all of the sentences and write it without paragraph ( I understand because most of it was dialogue and you need to separate it), which is quite new to me. I personally, would love to have more narrative so that I could know more about the surroundings set up, but so far its already enough. It was enjoyable.
The synopsis made me read this novel.
I like Lina's personality and how she deal with those scheming people.
A nice read. The grammar is good, needs just a little tiny bit of proofreading.
Best of luck, author!
I like that the story is told from both point of views, both ML and FL. I also like the little inserts from the author in the midst of the story. FL doesn't seem to be a damsel in distress type of a character, which is very refreshing as I believe we need more self-made and strong FL in contemporary romances. I think it was hilarious how the ML was so bothered by being called a creep. :D
Here I will point out a few things that I hope will help the author in the long run. :)
The grammar: So far, it is an easy read and quite compelling, I find myself pulled into reading further. Still, the story will need a little bit of proofreading and some editing to make the flow seamless and pleasant. Minor things and very easy to fix. :)
Description: I like it, so far quite well described and fun, yet, as I mentioned in the grammar, some editing can really bring out the surroundings and the characters more vividly, and brings the background into life for the reader.
To sum it up:
I like the flow of the story and how it changes POVs between the leads. It really brings out the different personalities they have and how they may complement each other in the future. The story looks promising and fun with twist and turns.
I'm curious on how the relationship will develop between the two leads, and will read on to see how it all turns out.
Keep up the good work, author! :)
Very engaging from the first chapter, very interesting scenes and interactions from the first chapter.
Lina is a character with a very strong personality which is evident from the first scene, looking forward to see all the ways she'll evolve.
A large cast of characters that all seem to have agency and compelling motivations!
Well this is the 14th romance novel I've read here on webnovel and I have to say, I'm very impressed. I like how Tina is not like other Mcs where female leads are timid and quiet. Her thoughts and fantasies are beautifully presented. The writing quality is also decent. I've read upto chapter 17, it has been a good read so far. Thus after considering, I review this novel as a 4.6 star. Good job Author! Hope you keep it up.
A very detailed synopsis you have here, bro... It's enough for readers to have the slight peek of what kind of story you have to offer. Writing Quality is really good and the dialogues and conversations they're having is easily flowing through the readers minds. Anyways, keep up the good work
A well-detailed synopsis.
The story starts very interesting and lets the reader immerse in the airport scene. The conversation are written very well and flows perfectly. The dynamic of the people and their conversation with each other makes the story richer. MC's character is very likeable.
It is a good read!! With great writing and grammar!!!!
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