Chapter comments on the chapter A new home(Part-1) of the book A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world

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Adypoker
That is dumb! He should've only upgraded his Life Tier Last!!!
3yr
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Fimbultyr
thanks for the chapter. dear author, could you make a marking when there is a shift in perspective or time skip? I was very confused when they first traveled with Ryan and than met Ryan at the fort...
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SoySauceSovereign
Hey man watch out for run-on sentences. I’ve noticed your paragraphs are usually one sentence long and can be broken up into several sentences. By doing this the reader will not feel fatigue from trying to follow along with the story. Keep up the good work!
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Kurumi21
Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍
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Lannydar
😀👍👍Thanks for the Work
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Silver9576
confused why time skip over the action? and spend time on reports . story moving way to fast, jumping around to much.
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HadesOnDrugs
The plot is amazing though events taking are too much to grasp like a 15 year old kid having family problems suddenly ina a snap changed to an all knowing commander of the changed earth its too much to grasp shouldn't the kid be atleast confused at what had happened and thinking it through, but no he just starts to kill and upgrade
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cameron_scears
why did you skip to him getting life tier 2 even though it makes no sense you didn't even show an update of it
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