thanks for the chapter.
dear author, could you make a marking when there is a shift in perspective or time skip? I was very confused when they first traveled with Ryan and than met Ryan at the fort...
Hey man watch out for run-on sentences. I’ve noticed your paragraphs are usually one sentence long and can be broken up into several sentences. By doing this the reader will not feel fatigue from trying to follow along with the story. Keep up the good work!
The plot is amazing though events taking are too much to grasp like a 15 year old kid having family problems suddenly ina a snap changed to an all knowing commander of the changed earth its too much to grasp shouldn't the kid be atleast confused at what had happened and thinking it through, but no he just starts to kill and upgrade
Adypoker