No quiero que se tome a mal mi calificación pero esperaba que tardará más las modificaciones de la historia, soy un lector nuevo que leyó esto y si en general me gustó el giro de la trama aunque me entristeció lo de Ainz me interesó la historia y es muy buena pero aún no estoy acostumbrado a tanta maldad ok perdón
well well, I came for my lemon but the mrd you give me offended me, I don't understand why you put r+18 if there is none of that, in qualification they qualify it as good, but mrd of history, if you make an evil character make it evil to the marrow not the gray ladybug that you present to us as mc
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I love the story ALOT!!! But currently the Author is taking a break. I hate when authors take a break. i know they need time for themselves and stuff but if they didnt want people to complain about their absence they shouldnt have made it so good. I havent come across another novel like this. Wether it be the character, power, etc. its new and i love it completely!
Thought it would have been horror-ish (since pennywise), it wasn't.
the mc is quite literally trash in all sense of the word, there were some good moments but that's practically it.
the MC also did a lot of questionable things which makes me concerned for the author.
for short, good idea, terrible execution. had to turn off my brain to attempt to keep some idea of understanding, didn't work as now I wish I didn't read this.
I hope if the author ever retries this, that he/she/them could try and plan more and also just be more creative.
I know this is fanfic and all, but why go to different worlds. Can't the story continue in the same world, and penny-wise is a powerful ghost of a town, not the entire world.
You could have changed the penny-wise world; into a world filled with more powerful scary ghosts and monsters. And is following the canon really important in fanfics.
I never get it; it's a fanfic, the first thing you should be doing is kicking the canon out.
It would be a great story if u had started with penny-wise not being overpowered. Although I don't know how many abilities penny-wise has, u should have only given him abilities like.
Illusion, and getting stronger with the power of fear. the more fear he gathers more powerful his illusion ability becomes. And that it, I have watched IT 2; but the ending didn't feel like classic penny-wise.
Anyway instead of being a dimensional being, can't he be more normal and all of its backgrounds were just an illusion that penny-wise created.
I absolutely love the concept as IT is my favorite.The story you have written is really good so far, anyways good job and I am expecting more from you author-sama.
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Author your story is very good as mc is ruthless when needed and smart by nature. Doing everything thoroughly and i really liked u killing off beverly as multiverse has infinite no of waifu so why stuck to few. And keeping them like a harem is also idiotic when u can keep getting more so i just hope u take this recommendation and keep writing.
This novel is one of the best and one of my favourites but I have only one question, in his stats what does mana and energy do, does mana have something to do with magic.
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I've never read something like this.
its unique and actually amazing just needs more in-depth details and a slower pace plus I get the whole he needs fear to get stronger but he also needs a rest like didn't get a wife why not relax for a while then continue
I honestly saw this in featured but I dismissed it cus it was about a clown until 1 or 2 weeks later I remembered about it and I was curious so I tried to search it but I couldn't remember what it was called so finding this again was truly a shock
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when i read it i got the inspiration to make it a dark horror story, take over the city make it to a evil corrupt wonder city mafia drugs prostitution murderer daily and they worshiping him
The overall premise is quite interesting and I have no issues with the character design, or the update schedule.
My biggest gripe is with the writing quality.
It is far from the worst stuff on this site, but it isn't great either. There are all sorts of issues, missing the occasional word (and, I, or), and misusing words (your instead of you're). But the biggest issue is with commas and periods. The author seems to think that a paragraph is one long run on sentence. There are places where commas should be replaced with periods, and other places were there should be a period, but there is no period or comma. This is the largest issue with the story.
I'm not usually a fan of pure evil MC's but by the Old Ones this man has done a phenomenal job at it. He portrays pennywise perfectly. The only complaint I have is some of the writing is off, either missing words or flow of then sentences but it's few and far between. other than that perfect fic.
So i just caught up to the most recently updated chapter at the time of me posting this review. Have some stars and a rating from me, okay? Take IT! LOL
I take my hat off to you noble author a full-fledged story very few fiction of an incredible clown the plot, the development and of course I hope to see the end if he ever sees but leaving is
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