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notA_mockingame47
Haven't read yet.. I have some questions (spoilers are welcome)
Is the mc girl or boy? I have read some comments that write "he/she" why?
Will there be romance or something of sorts?
thanks!!!
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sonicslow4595
Haven't read this yet but the fact that is a Fmc story with no romance has made shade some tears of joy am giving it a 5* just because of that
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YourSexySenpai
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Nah_U_Stupid
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Duku_GanRyu
at chapter 18 interesting so far.
but one big question isnt the main character in the summary a girl?? like Raven hasnt even appeared? or is it about Draven who is a boy?
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lessonsofteacher
Umm, I didn't read this story, but I read the synopsis, and I am so confused. Extremely confused. What was that? I just don't even know what to say, what is happening there? Everything is in one format and I don't know when the scene changes or what happens. It doesn't make me want to read the story, but it does leave me confused. You probably have an actually good story and good luck and good morning. And just in case we don't meet, good afternoon, good evening, and goodnight.
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RealityGod
Saw the Yuri tag and my brain be like collect them all. Seriously, I love Yuri. They are the purest form of love..............................m.
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Jesus_be_ballin
like another review I saw on this book this description did to give me a ****ing Stroke............................................. hopefully it's good
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NirvanaPenguin
just reading the description made me wanna read it jajaja, tough that "dragon sword" i was imagining "her" growing a rod jajajaja that would have been fun, a futa MC ππ€£ππ»
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Alshiera_Imara_18
The story has a lot of potential, it is up to the author to fulfil it, but the description makes it sound epic. Will read soon. Hope it gets a lot a attention in the future.
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Roccxan
I don't know how to write reviews. So I'll just write what I think. This is a good book. It's worth your time to read. I look forward to the next chapters.
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shillbear1
this look like it's going to be pure chaos and i love chaos
my understanding from your description is that an mental unstable person have a voice in his/she? head die for some reason now got a system too resulting in pure chaos lets hope I got it right
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NatTosh
Author-san I believe in u! please give us more Chaptersπ₯Ί
The sorry us so good and is building up for something great, I understand life gets in he way but please don't leave us waiting for long β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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BookWizard23412
Review of a musketeer pilot codenamed F. U. C. K.
At this point in the multiverse calendar, I'm on the verge of brain rape.
Signals from the common sense center stopped coming a week ago.
Blowing bubbles from my saliva and squeezing out the remnants of my mind, I write this review.
Mr. author if you see this, tell my relatives from the Union of Cultivation realms that I have learned Zen
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fswmoq80
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Kenringdomstorys
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NoNoNo_Nope
Alright it's time! I've been reading this book for a while a oh boy it's been an emotional eide to say the least
Author's pretty good, improves very quickly and is just so cool
if you're up for some fun, tears, fights full if action it's probably the book for you
Author keep it coming ππππ
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NatTosh
OH MY GOD!! I just binge read fifty chapters! WooWw DAaAaamMNnn awesome!!!
Keep up the good work!
Imma go get some sleep!
Gooooooooodddddniiiigghhhtttttttt
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MarkTheLegend
Awesome book keep it up!
I would say more but I'm trying not to spoil anything.β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Legit though, the best feature is that the characters are not static but have changing personalities all the time. Some people might not like that, personally I do love it. They always learn from their experiences
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THE_Everybody_ON
The story is so good canβt wait to get moreππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππβοΈβοΈπππππππππππππππππ
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ken_ringdomstory
Hey there!
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Mmm_Mmmm
Sooo gooood loovee it!! it's unique and really one of a kind, in my opinion. Plus, author always improving and would reply to almost every comment. It's just too great.
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HikoistO79
I really like this. The book has so much potential. The author is always showing improvement. The only down side is that it's so UNDERRATED. I'm really excited to see how this will turn out to be!
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Daoist913668
Bookmarked, will read when it hits 50 chaps. Before that mark you usually barely get to dive into the story that you already find yourself waiting
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Nathan_Lee_1777
Soooo gooodd! I'm not an expert when it comes to rating books so I'll just say whatever made me like it.
*Spoiler alert*
First you have to keep in mind that this isn't a reincarnation story, which is really refreshing! But if you're looking for a hero that dies and gets sent to another universe, this book isn't for you.
The MC isn't overpowered, to make the story boring, but quite the opposite, he starts without any powers, only to discover he's got some special abilities once he gets kidnapped....
I can't say more without spoiling a lot of the fun, but the writing style is definitely awesome, not easy for beginners, but quite good if you ask me
As for the story development.. all I have to say is DAMMMMNN it always gets me excited! It's not a static story, the plot is always three times more complicated that you'd think
As much as I've read, side characters are so active, we even get to view some scenes in their point of view which is really fun. I'm so tried of books with only one MC doing his/her own thing alone
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DioisBAd4dM
I think this is gonna be a great book! Lol as the author I gotta make sure of it! I hope you guys out there enjoy my work:).
P.S. kind feel bad about the 5 star review on my own book
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