Luna, being very honest. This is one of my few experiences to come across this genre. But definitely, it was worth giving that chance.
I was entertained by your chapters throughout. Though, besides a few grammatical mistakes, the book is amazingly well written.
The story background is well written & characters are worth your time.
Well done!
Nice read, really magical one, but gotta add romance within the first 3-4 chaps to attract more readers.
It's actually the best strategy, however u may mention it the synopsis if it is gonna be a slow romance.
Good Luck author
Because ur story has high emotional rollercoaster rides. There are very positive characters and they are self efficient and motivated. We can read these chapters with smile on your face and positively in your heart.
Purva_Narang