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MizKano
Hello author!the story have nice development so more chapters please.............[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Doxombre
Honestly at first I was so confused, I didn't read the summary that closely so that was probably my fault. I didn't really get the plot or why the characters are doing what they are doing, but it's entertaining to a point I kept reading.
The writing quality and progression is pretty good for someone who is apparently new to this, it's certainly better when I first wrote (not that I am any better). I had no problems with grammar, there are some errors like past or present tense getting mixed up but not enough to ruin the mood.
Overall this is a pretty okay book, I haven't really gotten that far in reading the chapters but this is what I think of it so far.
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Hyacinth_FS
Hello!
I'm being shameless here self-promoting.
The story is about a guy who died in a magical universe.
Then got reborn in a non-magical universe on a planet called earth.
The twist in the story and main focus is the MC having two controlling two different body having one soul.
It's a story about friendship, family, love, action and MC struggling to live controlling two bodies at the same time.
This is my first book, I'm not an English speaker and don't have prior experience. So completely a newbie.
Also, this story will share multiple universes that will tie in with my other future works I have plans for.
Some magical fantasy elements and mentions I'm that will be revealed in the story for the shared multi-verse building.
Hope readers like my story and help me improve.
I personally think because of my limited grammar and vocab the story feels a bit bad that's my opinion but I will improve as I go.
Thank you, for reading.
Author-Hyacinth_FS.
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Emmalynne
The story is great, I am loving the plot so far. It's very interesting to see two different body with the same soul concept. I love the characters, they are well written. My favorite character is Sabastian and Aurora. I am really looking forward to the yuri moments.
I also ship AuroraXNyx.
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Shavedwolf691
The novel is good, the plot is solid and has an interesting premise. If anything would need to be added might be nyx or auroras ships as the novel carries the yuri tag. Other than that, it is a good novel and I hope it's not dropped.
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