Reviews of Star Wars: The New Force by TheMostAbstract - Webnovel

its really good! it's too bad it hasn't been updated, I would hate for this masterpiece to go to waste, if you can find enough time in the future, please update it?

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Grammar is good the interaction between characters is kinda wacky sometimes forces need some tweaking. But I hate the character design of the MC so 1 star. In first chapter the MC is Nerfed already I don't like the start do you even know what Omnipotence is. I'm gonna say 3% power of Omnipotence is Infinity, [Infinity = Infinity] is it that hard to Calculate in other words Omnipotent beings cannot be nerf. You can argue if it is Nigh Omnipotent then I don't have a problem but Omnipotent realy dude nah.

A nice book. Grammar is great and especially the way you describe things. What can I say? You have a way with words dude. Chapters may be short but the story flows nicely unlike other novels. It's a great work overall my friend. I just wish the chapters are longer.

7 chapters in and the story is great. I was a little worried when the mc was a ROB but with limits and a laissez faire attitude the mc is breaking all cannon so far and I love it. Finally anni is away from the jedi with them having no idea the better. Didn't really understand why he let padme take mauls ship though, with all the secrets on it I think it will be hard to get back especially since the jedi know it has a cloak now. I know the mc did some space wizard stuff to it bit can it come back to him?

So I just wanted to thank you for reading and possibly reviewing my story. I do this as a hobby and mostly write books just for me, and I have yet to publish a complete book. I want to try and bring a little bit of entertainment and happiness to my readers through my work.