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Niamnia
this is so fk alsome please make
more chaptersit a waste Of novel being shut down once you start something at least finish Its a waste Of talent
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Guillhermo_De_Leon
continua continua continua continua continua continua continua continua continua continua continua continua continua continua continua continua continua continua
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Izashi
I'm really interested in this novel completly my type, if you know what I mean ;). It would be great if you could keep up the uploads like the last few days and increase the lenght of the capter. I will be waiting for new chapters, also thanks for taking your time to write this novel.
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DaybreakOfficial
if you dislike grammatical errors you should stay away from this novel. The general idea isn't bad tho, having a system take over the body for example is something new which I appreciate.
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Eversnowy
more slave and *** scene please. all hail system! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Silver_Epsilon
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