The story is just irresistible 😋.I love it more because it's making me more curious to know what's gonna happen to the characters,,,,,,I have read alot of web novels and most of them got alot of grammatical errors but this one is an exception ,your editing is pretty good 💯.The flow of the story is just perfect.Good job Sally👏
I love it..I love it...I love it!! The story is amazing without the clichéd FL losing her virginity in the first few chapters..ML's arrogant but not to the FL..All in all, I love it!🤭💜... Can't wait for more updates.
Added to my library🔖
Yayy my favorite genre. I love romance novels. I live for them.. 💕🤭 But really your storyline is good and pretty interesting. Although it has cliche scenes but romance itself is cliche so I don't mind reading it at all. Shameless reader hooking up for this novel. Thanks. 😊
Let us start with the negative. The only problem I found is that the chapters were too short! That is all I have to criticize about.
Now for the positive:
-Characters are strongly developed. I love the premise, it makes the plot more attention grabbing which piques both my interest and curiosity to read further in order to know what happens next. As for the stability of updates, this is always an automatic five for me since I prefer quality over quantity.
-Not much of a problem when it comes to character design since I was able to portray all of them in a few paragraphs or so. It was an amazing read despite not it being the usual type of novels that I read. All in all, this novel deserves a total of five!
Another romance story! Well, I could barely say that this novel possesses a good and interesting plot. You 've imagined scenarios that can be happened in reality.
But, just like me as an ******* author, a novice to be certain needs also an improvement. Do not worry but I am too need to improve.
I hope you will find this review helpful. Another thing, you can add a mind-blowing twist with MC for the readers to be interested.
Good job author! Keep up the good work and let us all soar high!
That's what came to my mind when I started reading..
Dude, leave the review section just go and read the novel
Just 9 chps but I'm hooked to it...
I'm loving it.. waiting for more updates
Best of luck dear
Honestly? I am not that much of a fan of these genres. However, I can see the detail of how you want it to be. I can basically imagine a K-drama playing out hahaha! Although there were parts that got me confused like how she seems unaware of what's happening and all that. But it was answered in later chapters anyway. For a short while, I thought it was a transmigration novel haha!
But yes, personally, I am not a fan of this genre but I can tell that people who are a fan of such will love this!
Also, I noticed that chapters are a bit too short? You get me coughing to look for answers like the first episode - 'Was she drugged?' hahaha glad the premise of the story did not revolve around that~
Very strong engaging story. The characters are very strongly developed, and I like the fact that this story hints so much of the risque, but is not the main point of the story or plot. I'm very interested by the characters and how their interactions affect the world. So quite an interesting read if you like strong character building that leads to very natural story flow.
Mei Feng is quite in the middle of troublesome people. I hope that rather than getting strung around, she would toughen up and stand up for herself more properly. :>>
I don't know if it's because your chapters were short, or it's just that the pacing of the story was quite fast?
Also, I have some qualms with the misuse/absence of some punctuation marks. This mistake often leads to run-ons/comma splices. I perfectly understand your passages, but I just want to tell you that your narration could look even more beautiful. Be aware of some verb tenses too.
Overall, MeiFeng being bewildered could be felt through your wonderful narration. Please keep it up!
I read the author's review before writing mine. And I laughed reading about the Head of WIfe's Slave Club haha. Everything is great about the story, except the length of the chapters. You should increase the length of ch because readers want more ;)
though I do not like docile characters, but I actually liked the main female lead. The story is relatively slow which should be the case.
overall I'll give 4.8/5 since my personal preference is a strong female lead
Here is the authors review.
This story is going to be the same love story plot but with different emotions. There is no rape and forcing anywhere. I will introduce you all to the head of wife slave's club
This is a very good story. As someone who isn't a romance fan i was shocked to find just how well crafted this novel is, it manages to engage and entertain where others would go stale through clever writing and well thought out characters.
One of my favorite genres. I love the starting. Not too many chapters are there but still the pace is going good. I love cold, overbearing but at the same time warm personality of ml. Looking forward to more chapters because it's definitely going in my collections.
Indeed, a docile female lead! I prefer strong-willed leads who won't just sit still and take sht from everyone else, but since the first chapter clearly said that the lead was going to be docile, that's that.
Overall, although there were some mistakes in the writing, I enjoyed it. Keep it up, author!