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The story has potential itself. Minor issues tho like grammar and congestion of paragraphs. Over-all, I enjoyed reading the 6 chapters I have read so far. I want to keep reading it.
Keep writing! Do not stop!
You are good at describing action scenes I think. The narration needs more improvement but there is always room for that because we are writers. Keep up the good work and share your story to the world whether people like them or not. I'm cheering for you, :)
Huge spoildr
Mc is Badass
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Who else remember the 'The Cool Anime System'?? Well this is it, the same genre, comedic(hopefully you laugh) Novel.
There's no Anime power like sharingan, Six path and Many more...
So I think... and I think what about, I insert Lin Fan? I was amaze when I think of it... and I was convulsing in excitement (no corona)
With me the Badass System and Lin Fan who can bring me down?
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