suggestion: Dont bash magical community magic prowess,, they are retarded racists, not weak
Dont make MC a friendly happy good guy idiot
If u bash,, make it sensible
Fk cannon
I generally don’t like it when a system can talk to the user. But this is different. It’s not a system in the normal sense of the word. It’s more of a grand piece of blood linked magic that carries the family library and collects more info. And adapts it’s name to better suit the user.
I have a hunch this fanfic might become my favorite in the world of Gary Potter. I hope he doesn't "rub Gary Potter's ass" (as the main characters do in many fanfiction), here he is the main character, not a potter.
amaturewriter