Sometimes it is difficult to tell who is speaking.
"What about it?"
"Are you interested yet?"
Normally, this would indicate a change in speaker, but I am inferring from context clues that it is the same person. This is the beginning of the book, so I am expecting this trend to continue, as it would be a monstrous task to reword the entire book. I'll do what I can to adapt, but it will bring me out of some moments.
Still the author must of been inspired by the SCOG novel, since the beginning is very similar. If its anything like SCOG then I'm sure to enjoy it. So far I'm getting good vibes from the story.
XONED