its really sad to see this story go it was great if your wondering why i hadnt seen it disaper by the way just look atmy libary and this was one of the first books on my acount and i only looked every now and then when it stopped updating until i just didnt check but i still wonder why do so many authers just delete there work just keep it there and forget about it
Nooooo!!! Why is it gone!?😢 I waited And waited patiently for one of my favourites to return and its gone! i guess i knew it was comming but i just didn’t want to accept it please re-write this though i really loved it!!☺️
You deleted all the chapters? Why? And please tell me you aren't giving up writing... Will your other book ever return?
Wow... didn't realize I liked your stories this much until now...
I enjoyed the novel very much and it quickly grew close to me.
The mc being reincarnated as a snake is something i really enjoy and for some reason I always need to chuckle when I read about her "slithering around" ;)
The way the characters appearances, fighting sequences, magic and the environment are being described definitely appeals to me (Idk but I imagine scales being ocasionally on the skin very pretty).
Kaguya as the main character first seemes to be very detached from other beings out for her own bemefit but quickly grows close to the two girls who happen to cross her path.
The story turns dark from time to time but I kinda need that to be invested in a novel.
Anyway following Kaguya and her tale makes me over all really happy so I definitely recommend reading it!
I am eager for more chapters to release but take all the time you need <3
Overall pretty good. The quality of writing is worth the 5 stars I gave. World background is also fleshed out, but there isn't much to it other than the fact that it was mentioned. Story has developed alright, but I hope more stuff happens, there hasn't been much other than going to the Grand Expanse and the town. Also, I found that some characters were weird, like Kaguya, she was a normal sick human girl, but once she got to the new world she ended up killing humans after like 8 chapters and she was fine with it. Any normal human would have problems, but she just kinda shrugged it off.
Other than that, I wish the story continues and get better.
Everything's just in my taste! Although the update sched is questionable at this moment, please do continue to write more about this book. I like the MC already!
As a man, this is disgusting to read. Everyman is a rapist, pedophile, scum or a bandit.
This novel is full of inconsistencies that if you have a brain will drive you crazy.
MC in a tournament fights men, mutilates them, humiliates them, doesn't care if she hurts them etc. First fight against a girl, she goes easy, doesnt hurt on her, talks to her, then says she will help her after the fight :D ...
like Author must have serious issues with Men.
I like yuri so much, but the author manages to make me hate this novel so much that i can't even bother reading it for the yuri.
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First of all, I already warn you: this message is being produced by [Google Translate], my English is non-existent ...
I found this story very pleasant, always remembering [So I'm a Spider, So What?] (kumo desu ga nani ka), this is good, always making me want to see what the world has to offer and showing the development physical and psychological of the protagonist.
In 90% of the story I read with a smile on my face (especially in the cute moments with Yuuno).
The story captivated me and I intend to accompany it whenever I can, I think I extended it a little more ... anyway, thanks for the incredible work 😁 I am looking forward to seeing more of the "little" white snake 😎
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This novel could be good later on of the story. but it beginning was off putting, what i mean about that is it didn’t click with me and did not have a smooth read through.
I had to stop reading a couple of times to figure out what’s going on in the situation and why it happen without warning or any sign. this would be a good novel if the author adds key points to certain situation and stops jumping over some.
How the character was flushed out had went over a lot of peoples heads so people didn’t really know what the character personality is like and why she did somethings, from the comments that I seen
from this you probably guess that i did not went that far in the story, I was hoping to go further in to the novel before waiting this review but it was starting to be difficult reading further on while not enjoying it.
i wish author best of luck.
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I really enjoy this novel its one of the best ive read. I hope that i get to see it get even better in the future and have a larger fan base because it deserves it.
I was surprised at how well this novel has been written so far. I was immediately pulled into the story and was surprised how well it's held my interest. I've read many different types of reincarnation novels and most of the time, it just becomes monotonous and bland, and I would seemingly get bored of it. This novel however made me quite disappointed that there was only 35 chapters available as of now, however I'll definitely be hanging around for the new chapters.
I'd like to give my thanks to the author for giving me such an exciting start to my day.
You deserve this
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Realy interesting story has the vibes of „Reincarnated as a dragon's egg” and „Kumo desu ga, nani ka?(i'm a spider, so what)” Though the worldbuilding could be less of an info dump.
While the story was really well written, there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Other than that it was very good, entertaining, and interesting.
Great story can't wait for more chapters :) keep it up ....................................................................................................................................
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