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KILLER_Pineapple
The mc is not the most likable but he’s not the worst just made a few very questionable choices and theres some developments that are questionable from the arthour like Shisui lightning mode but it’s translated pretty well so it’s a decent read
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Kono_phineas_da
Honesty the fanfic isn’t bad it’s so it gets the rating it does kinda objectively but it has one problem that makes me say bruh every single time, and that thing is recurring here it goes…. Mc sees yugao uzuki and it’s like love at first sight yayyy mc has a love interest right? WRONG mfer makes it the weirdest thing I’ve ever seen he points out that she’s a little girl even to him who is around like 8 and he says I’m not a lolicon but I like this little girl like huh??🧐 and so whenever he interacts with her it just feels like grooming because keep in full mind he’s 8 or years old and she’s like 4 but in his mind he’s actually older and he knows that 😵
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Nevren
The mc never once kills any canon characters and in general the larger story line is exactly the same as canon. Nothing interesting or unique happens, the author just sticks to canons rails never trying to change anything or give the mc and unique impact. If you've read the original story there's no reason to read this.
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Erick200
Muito bom, gostei...................... Muito bom, gostei...................... Muito bom, gostei...................... Muito bom, gostei...................... Muito bom, gostei...................... Muito bom, gostei...................... Muito bom, gostei......................
2yr
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DaoistcBAt6L
get rickrolled seriously tho pretty good, I remember reading this up to chapter 100 something like that also one of the first fanfic I read
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2yr
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DaoistAhM6W4
Esta realmente increible, no puedo esperar los proximo co de esta fantástica historia, el prota estaban chido muy ingenioso al implementar cosas de su mundo y eso es lo que de verdad me gusta, aunque sería genial si en lugar de yamanaka sea uzumaki aunque aún así está bueno
3yr
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Sakkaku_no_mori
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3yr
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Endra_A
I love the world building, character development, application of knowledge from MC's past life, "Screw canon" moments, also love the fact that MC was paired with Pakura. 10/10.
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Craiberk
This is another one of those "Author believes that a giant training montage sequence makes for a great story" and "introducing a bunch of famous and well-established characters and interacting with them through training counts as social interaction" type of fan-fics. While it may be your cup of tea, but once you read one, you read them all. At some point it becomes boring and personally I have clearly passed that line. Worldbuilding is rather shallow. Despite throwing around terms like "butterfly effect" and changing fate of some minor characters, not much deviation were to be found until I decided to just give up at ch 38. Translation quality is decent, no major errors to point out. maybe some minor typos. Overall, a decent distraction for a couple of hours but don't expect this fan-fic to rock your world.
3yr
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g105x7max
10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10 10/10
3yr
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Laylin13
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3yr
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Lustsifer
I think someone already reposted this story to WN. The title is "Ryo" if I am not mistaken. But the total chapter uploaded is less than this.
3yr
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wedance
quit good i should say. hope not to be drop, like many others, it is one of the best fan made naruto novels that i've read hope every body else enjoy it as i did
3yr
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rqc1209
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One of the best naruto fanfic I've read so far. Grammar is good with few mistakes. I like the fact that mc doesn't hesitate to stray from canon if he feels like it. I kinda wish for mc to develop is relationship with pakura faster. And also I'm with harem but make it small scale like maybe maximum of four preferably pakura, mei, yugao and tsunade?. Also I was kinda expecting the mc to have ninjutsu version of ice age (from one piece) without needing/relying on water, just pure ice out of thin air fed only by either chakra or nature energy. Anyway I'm writing this review after I caught up with the latest chapter which is currently at chapter 264.
3yr
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Lyroy34
OcxPakura | I read this history complete in the ese, and I want to say that this naruto fanfic is the best so far, 100% highly recommended. OC X PAKURA OC X PAKURA OC X PAKURA OC X PAKURA OC X PAKURA OC X PAKURA OC X PAKURA
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KrustyCabs
The fact that you actually provided the link to the raws, translations and acknowledged the Author and translator is commendable. 90% of people only states that "it's not theirs and take no full credit" but doesn't give any acknowledgement to the author nor the translators. I also like the fact that you've only posted the chapters from the site that discontinued translating and not the chapters from current translator. This approach will not lower the current translator's view count. On the contrary, providing the link to the current translation site will likely increase it's viewer count.
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3yr
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Edgelord666
Please take it down bro. It is the work of translation otaku sonplease take it down....... .............. ....................................
3yr
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Ttsfih
who is love interest of mc?🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔👀👀🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
3yr
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