Chapter comments on the chapter Cultivation realms of the book Magic and Martial War God

good work

Good job

Thx for the chap

thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work waiting for new chapters for all of your stories

This is a weird novel for me, and it's not because of the plot. I simply don't understand at least 1/4 of what is going on. First, the author seems to be making things overly complex. It's to the point that I've stopped caring about how things work in this world, because it's a system that only makes sense in the author's mind. The flight system alone has me skipping the entire explanation. This brings us to the second issue. The author is giving way too much information at any given time. While explaining the flight mechanics, he somehow goes on to explaining genes and animals. iI don't know how he got there, but it has no relevance on what he was originally explaining. To be honest I'm not sure it would ever be relevant in this story. It feels like the author is trying to explain minute and inconsequential details to make this world make sense. However, this is fantasy. We don't need everything explained. Lastly, I can't even understand much of the over explained information, because whatever the author is using to translate, is worse than even Google translate. there are many sentences that read as gibberish and seen to be just random words. This is making me skip entire paragraphs to find the one or two that I can enjoy reading. I appreciate the fact that writing a novel is hard work. However, if you're trying to do this for a living, there is a lot of improvement needed. I'm my opinion, this novel is basically unreadable in it's current iteration. English not being his native language is no excuse for this poor of a product, if he posts the novel in English.

So...he is very fond if the sword... remember that...