So far this story has shown to be quite promising despite a few grammatical errors here and there, and if the author continues with their overall performance, it will definitely become a story that's worth reading for it's plot and characters. I'm looking foward to how the author will shape it in the coming chapters and hope that they will not drop it. Stay safe everyone!
it was the first book that i read here and i really love it, overall when it comes to the writing quality, the style of your writing and most important part was the story, i love it
I really liked your story. I'll ne waoting for your next chapter. Kepp in reading more which will show improvement. Your story has a good beginning. It is interesting.
All the best
Hanvaler