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Demon_blade
Please continue this novel ( ' ^ ' ) #######################################################################################################
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Akai_Onomia
This novel is legendary. I like how the mc just like turned into a beast that require all the strongest of humanity to even be able to be pushed back. Also love how she is slowly turning into a battle maniac.or already a battle maniac.
Pls dont drop this book
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FacelessMask
Was interesting at first even though I had to shut off my brain for it but I feel like the grammar just keeps getting worse like c'mon man even I can do better
also the thing with the sister and Juli? what the hell was up with that even when I'm shutting off my brain I couldn't understand what's going on like why are they here??? isn't the MC supposeed to be in the future? why is her friend from the past here without explanation? I honestly was also kinda disappointed how some characters just have one trait and that's it and also adding boy to the system was so cliche it didn't even work out I could keep going but it's just gonna take long and I'm not wasting my time doing that,
3/5 at best, Tbh I just gave it an extra star because of female MC while the novel is still action based and not romance because that's rare on this site.
hope you're improving though.
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TheJoker
So far I have Read the first few chapters So far so good! Overall so far its been a great book and has a grat style. easy to read. hope the author keeps this up! THIS BOOK IS AMAZING!!
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DaoistLHFrmy
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reboot23
*Yawn*... ok. This novel is clearly trash, why because the author can't write good stories he started out bad then got worse when he decided to add anime powers in it(want an example the sharingan) the fighting parts are crap and the author seems like he forgot the other chapters.
but in a way the novel is intriguing
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Kaisen1
So good you will love it. more please
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ImpureThoughts
Like it the MC is a lovely psychopath くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡
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Cram_In_A_Jar
The story and the promises are great. The mc gets over powered real quick I wish it would slow down a little which it's looking like it might. Other than that I feel there needs to be some better transitions between stuff and less jumping around. This is done a few time and is done once after the trio when on a little trip out to karaoke. The group of not good lads surrounded them. We were told that one got kicked in the crotch then cut to the next chapter about a back story. Other than that keep up the good work.
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Colby_Trafton
Love it! The MC doesn't push away her new personality but embraces it. Usually MCs start with an emotionless personality and then regains their emotions but here she grows colder and colder which I like 😀
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PBOM2004
This is my First story so Expect some plot holes and wrong grammars. English is not my first language, I would welcome the critics so that I would Improve as the story goes on.
Ignore the Five-star Rating
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Dejan_Grncarski
Great start to the story just wish there was more frequent chapters like 2 a week.
Try not to repeat her name many times like in the 1st chapter (Rose did this. Rose did that. Rose goes to sleep... Use other words like "she").
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