Chapter comments on the chapter Fighting Against… Shanks (kid) of the book One Piece: Reborn as a Fishman (COMPLETED)

It will be better if he stay till the pirate king crew dissolve and he feels so off I really don't know why it feels so off

I'm guessing this will get better as the story continues because so far it's just been the same three things over and over. Timeskip, New Ability, Timeskip, Training, Timeskip, rinse, and repeat over and over again. May i suggest also downloading Grammarly, it's a free to use grammar fixer.

I also suggest that shyarly is his girlfriend

please don't Tell me that he will leave the Crew before he gets famous as one of the pirate King's crewmember 🥺

Please just call him Po instead of Poo. Maybe Samehada can be a New World barnacles that absorb peoples stamina and after Jaws beats them in a fight he turns the Barnacles into a sword called Samehada

At least he refers Roger as Captain.

Don’t let him eat a devil fruit since he is a fishman, at his peak he can become the strongest in sky,land, and sea. Conpare to only being good in sky and land(since devil fruit make you useless in sea.

Each time I see Oden, I just think of oden(japanese fish cake stew)...... 🤣

po and shifu huh. i respect you even more than i areldy did.

Csn you make it to where he has someone create samehada the sword of kisame from naruto since the sword is a shark and so is he they would make a duo

Thxs for the chap

Thanks for the chapter

Es gracioso que tengas la portada con Kisame y se comporte como Sasuke todo edge lord

omg.. poo and shifu.. panda mink en red panda.. omg i just realized>_<

Shanks

Poo and Shifu XD I also find that he consider that 8 year old lion mink a cabin boy when he himself is going to be a 7 year old soon XD Wish Poo and Shifu were younger though.

I guess I'll be stopping here then, the whole poo and shifu thing is just cringey. I'm sure that dramatic 3rd character is also a reference that I cant place. Suddenly having knock off kung-fu panda characters join the crew is so jarring, and makes me uncontrollably cringe and dread the cliches coming. Goodluck author, and have fun.

thanks for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter!