Great narration! I think the conversation helps a lot in developing the whole settings of the story! Are you interested in getting your work into a writing contest?
Espionage, science, romance, class system, power grab, with both a modern and dystopian feel, and how the main characters navigate through it all is very clever and interesting.
I like the adventure, espionage and human story playing through out the chapters. I'm interested to read more! I cannot wait to see where this adventure takes Alex and Jack.
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