I wonder...is she working with the elves? Or is she one of the ones working so hard to thwart them? Regardless, she has to be interested in what happened with Elves attack from the previous year, since that is really the only significant thing that happened last year....unless they keep track of what happens on the home planets without the acolytes knowing it
Now that we know. She won't still be looking down on him. Before, she was only helping him out of curiosity. Now she will value him for sure. I think she is defintely a follower of Chaos. She mentioned, Ancient Magus-that's a hint for me.
hello...I think it's getting boring. I think there should be couple of meanwhile chapters showing happenings on earth. that builds suspense u know. like what happened in royal palace after the Morgana matter and also what kilgargah thinks of emery or some back story. it kills the character building process. please do consider it. because it's getting boring focusing too much on main character.
I want to point out a couple writing problems. One, is foreshadowing and tension. This problem is his core was never mentioned before, and instantly resolved. Makes it feel cheap, not that his alchemy test had any tension either.
The 2nd is related to plot. The structure of the school feels very weird. If you are at a great war, and this is the best school on the humans side, why are they not educating them in theory. They make the kids figure things on there own for a period of a week or two, and put them in gladiator games for reasons like; it seems cool. Frankly, this school/education/weird goals makes me want the humans dead if this is the best they can do. Emery is a walking nuke with no education, morales, or ethics; and is powered up very conveniently. These mages have a hard time upgrading to the next level, while Emery an essential cave man has doubled his power in one week. Mages are supposed to be an intelligence based class, and Emery hasnt been shown to study once.
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